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Genesis

light through darkness spills a verdant sylvan idyll- night concedes the day Inspired by Raul's photo

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John Freeman

Date: 12/2/2009 4:43:00 PM

awesome win Brian, sincerely, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/1/2009 6:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in this contest. Lovely writing. Love, Joyce

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations Brian, on your 3rd place win in Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/25/2009 7:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Brian! Great Haiku! Peace and love, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/25/2009 12:19:00 PM

congrats on the win in the contest!!

James Fraser

Date: 11/25/2009 10:11:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku Brian, no wonder it's in the top three >> James

Sean Kelly

Date: 11/25/2009 7:15:00 AM

And not a Phil Collins in sight . Great haiku , Brian and well done ...

Brandee Augustus

Date: 11/24/2009 2:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your third place finish! I think this is a pretty poem, if that can be a description. I like your title.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/24/2009 8:12:00 AM

Congratulations Brian...this poem is so beautiful and and a sure winner! A wonderful haiku! ~ Love, Carrie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/24/2009 5:28:00 AM

very very nice! congrads! Light & Love

Elaine George

Date: 11/24/2009 3:33:00 AM

BRIAN, THIS IS AN EXCEPTIONALLY BEAUTIFUL HAIKU. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN IN RAUL'S CONTEST. SINCERELY, LAINIE

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2009 3:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Brian. Love, Carol

Anonymous Norman

Date: 11/24/2009 1:40:00 AM

congratulations, nice poem the last line is awesome. love and light

Donna Golden

Date: 11/23/2009 11:14:00 PM

Absolutely wonderful haiku, Brian! Congratulations on your well earned win! Hugs, Donna

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 9:40:00 PM

Congrats, Brian, on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. well deserved win for this glorious poem.. blessings ... luv... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Raul Moreno

Date: 11/23/2009 9:21:00 PM

Brian, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/19/2009 8:26:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku. Very well written. I like the 2 first lines rhyming. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.

P Sheart

Date: 11/19/2009 8:02:00 PM

Beautiful Brian, All the best with this one! Good luck in Raul's contest! Love Light Patricia

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/19/2009 6:50:00 PM

elegant! inspired! jimbo

Deneen White

Date: 11/19/2009 4:21:00 PM

hi Brian, such an exsqusite write, take care D-nyce

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/19/2009 1:40:00 PM

Mr Strand, you've done it again. I love how everyone sees something different in these pictures. BG

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/19/2009 9:20:00 AM

As always, excellent. God Bless Phyl

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/19/2009 7:40:00 AM

This is so wonderful....so very beautiful, right into my favorites!! ~ Love, Carrie

Elaine George

Date: 11/19/2009 6:25:00 AM

SENSATIONAL! Best wishes in Raul's contest, Brian. Elaine

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2009 4:59:00 AM

Very expressive and descriptive Haiku for the contest. Good luck on your entry. Keep writing. Thanks for the comments on my work.Adding you to fav poet list so it will be convenient to read your work. Sara