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in 2020 and beyond- chrismas could be different gone the traditional tree you may have one of twisted wire colored LED and pipes maybe upside down for space perhaps environmentally friendly trees made with water bottles and PVC pipes or a simple gold painted plywood tree shape gone the traditional santa will have a shiny silver electric car the reindeer retired unwanted not needed or he may have his own bright red jet oh and no more jolly santa he went on fiber super diet and mrs santa he dumped and no more down the chimney for santa most of your gifts will be sent by federal express all he will do is make a showing on christmas eve with empty boxes to make an impression no more baby dolls or barbie dolls or fire engines for kids- they will get techno savy gadgets and on line data as gifts or maybe a gift card call me old fashion I think I will keep the traditional for all of my life and maybe I will give an unwanted reindeer a forever home - ____________________________ November 17, 2015 Free Verse

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Date: 11/20/2015 8:18:00 PM
Wonderful write, Broken Wings!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/21/2015 7:45:00 AM
Eve, thanks for the visit and the wonderful, I like that ~
Date: 11/19/2015 2:34:00 AM
A wonderful commentary. Yes, please keep the traditions alive. So, you can create quite clever satire! You have many facets. What a very, very clever person are you. So, I can now only smile and laugh.
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:14:00 AM
Duke, oh yes it was a delightful leap from my usual, and fun to write, thanks for the visit and I am with you, I will keep the traditional forever ~
Date: 11/18/2015 3:18:00 PM
Made me laugh this one Broken Wings, It's a great write and the line about Federal express made me roll up!!! Great sense of humour Good luck in the contest Best Wishes Kevin
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2015 4:18:00 PM
Hi Kevin, so happy you found this poem humorous as that was the intention. I think I will stay with tradition.. thanks for visiting
Date: 11/18/2015 8:32:00 AM
Scary but very imaginative and well composed, dear B.W.! Hope it never comes to pass and if it comes hope I will be around to see it! Haha! Love it! Good luck!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thanks Dem for visiting , I agree it would be horrible that Christmas could be like that, I will desperately hold onto traditional

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