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Funny How Time Seems To Fly

Constant change in hue Yesterday's green is morbid yellow today In stark dismay Today's twinkles in tombs tomorrow In a black square sorrow In passing time reside More sorrows than pleasure Happily, time is also A healing eraser All the waves are different and new The one now in your view Will splash away and out A time, a moment, a bout A life in sprout Like the love spree In you and me Now wet in dew Now dead bone dry Funny how time seems to fly However you try to Hold time in your dew It will laugh at you and go by Funny how time seems to fly Let you and I therefore Go and stand under the sky Two dots of dye Before the time today Bow and say Thank you You have given us many a golden ray Today Let tomorrow too Come in our shoe Time that we played in Time that we are at play with Roses that will bloom Guns that will open fire All aim at the good bye Inexorably Funny how time seems to fly ______________________________________ 5/10/2016

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Date: 10/6/2016 8:30:00 AM
Probir, a 7 for this thought-provoking, philosophical poem! Time--a healing eraser and line 4--great! Janice
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/6/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thank you ... probir ...
Date: 10/5/2016 6:55:00 AM
Very well expressed, Probir:) all the best:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/5/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/5/2016 5:45:00 AM
This Morning my friend, I was thinking on the same lines and started writing a poem of how time flies but not about autumn but about me! Very poignant poem, profound with superb images and ideas! A seven dear, Probir!
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Date: 10/5/2016 6:46:00 AM
From your pen the flying time would definitely have taken surreal colours ... Thanks for liking my poem ...
Date: 10/5/2016 3:31:00 AM
Very nice... A big 7... Good luck with the contest...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/5/2016 5:11:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/5/2016 1:10:00 AM
It certainly does! Loved it, every word. /|\
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/5/2016 5:11:00 AM
Thank you ..

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