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Funny How Time Seems To Fly Premiere Contest Winner

Funny how time seems to fly… Seems like yesterday you were right here…here with me- Now I am left here alone, rummaging through your debris. You left such a mess but I’ll take care of your things- Oh my, how much sadness such a tragic death brings. They say in time a broken heart will eventually heal- I say to them, “well you don’t know exactly how I feel”. Time withers away like the dust on the forest grounds- And brings more sadness when in the lost and found. I still can’t believe that six short years have passed- Seems like yesterday is when I kissed you last. Why is it that every year time seems to fly more quickly? It didn’t seem too long ago you were frail and sickly. With the swift of a memory and a quick moment of regret- Brings me back to your final days, oh I’ll never forget. Time is funny sometimes, how it shows no mercy- Even though years are brisk, for your touch I’m still thirsty. In thirty years I will look back and wonder how time flies so fast- And I will embrace the fact empty days are nothing but the past. Until the day I die I will still be asking the Lord above why, In all the moments I’ve missed you, time seemed to fly. Maybe because during the days I’ve thought of your sweet tears- The minutes quickly turn into hours, and months turn into years. Funny How Time Seems To Fly October 3, 2016

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Date: 11/27/2016 7:04:00 AM
Another home run... JE
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Date: 11/4/2016 12:05:00 PM
Touchy n Excellent. Big Congrats to win. Hugs
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Date: 11/3/2016 9:51:00 AM
So sadly beautiful, Laura. Congratulations on your top of the podium Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/3/2016 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on top spot with this touching write, Laura:) well deserved:)
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Date: 11/3/2016 5:14:00 AM
This is beautiful, Laura - One of my LuLoo favorites! It is quite understandable why you got first place - this is a winner. Please fix the 3rd line in 3rd stanza so this gem can be etched in perfect perfection! Love it ... CayCay
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Date: 11/3/2016 2:14:00 AM
"for your touch I'm still thirsty". So beautiful. Well deserved first place Laura.
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Date: 11/3/2016 2:10:00 AM
So deep and sad but beautiful...Congrats on your top win in the contest...
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Date: 10/4/2016 11:47:00 PM
Sad poem on funny time, Laura:) touching and heartfelt:)
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