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Fruit of Her Womb

Whom should I compare her to! I look around I think a lot, but I find none She is my god~ ~ ~ ~my small god Worthy of praise without a pause Each time I look at her and see her grayish hair, "I am heavy with countless thoughts that clog my breath" As the day arrives like a crow in a cornfield each person draws to his end. This sadtruth makes me wail as a child. She carried me in her womb for months while some terminated theirs. There were days she found it hard to sleep when she had those false alarm labor cramps. Took care of me from cradle till I grew up and in those days she became a singer and an acrobatic dancer without a drum drummed for her. With lullabies she sang through the night, just to comfort me in till morning light. There were times I fed on her while her belly was empty as air. There were days she bore the blame for my fault. There were days she cried for me and days she went without just to have me wear something new, and said, "You're my future, my need." Her fruits has now begun to yield but, her days seem to speed I wish I have a catalytic spell to morph her back into a young girl so that I can take care of her for as long as I want. I wish I have the elixir of life to make her live for days seem to be just a single night. Only God is unending; But my love for her is a sea that will never dry.

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Date: 6/27/2017 6:12:00 AM
Delicate enough to move a heart and strong enough to motivate a mind in dedication...
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Date: 9/22/2016 6:39:00 AM
This is beautiful Afolabi, and your choice of words is superb.
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:48:00 PM
deep write... LINDA
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:59:00 AM
Classic, intelligent, sublime and graceful. As usual, yet another excellent piece from you dear poet. Happy new year once again
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Date: 11/19/2015 10:01:00 AM
what a lovely dedication. your mother seems amazing
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Date: 11/18/2015 1:04:00 PM
wow Afolabi, a beautiful dedication to your mother. so deep and tenderly crafted. i felt it! def a 7
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Date: 11/17/2015 6:35:00 AM
Excellent. Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks fro sharing it.
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:25:00 PM
Afolabi, for me this one of your best!! excellent piece!~Olive Eloisa
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Date: 11/16/2015 4:31:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to your mom. Exceptional feeling you have captured with this Piece.
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Date: 11/15/2015 9:43:00 AM
Any mother would be proud to receive this. Beautiful, sincere sentiments expressed here. S3L8 - Fruit, remove 's'. Good one, AM.
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Date: 11/15/2015 2:33:00 AM
Oh wow... this is a very wonderful, lovely and a very touching dedication poem to one of the most important persons to us in this world, my very dear friend, AM. I'm Loving and enjoying this excellent mother's poem of yours so much from the beginning til end. I feel so much for you here my very dear friend. A 7+++ from me. Thank you, thank you so much for sharing. Also for your precious time stopping by. More blessings to you! love lots and big hug, Leonora
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Date: 11/14/2015 3:38:00 PM
am, wow, you did your thing my brother....because she has influence unlike any other....you can find a new friend, a new job, a new child, a new Lover....but there is only one, you can never get another mother....Beautifully done my friend....
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Date: 11/14/2015 4:18:00 PM
She is un-exchangeable
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Date: 11/14/2015 4:16:00 PM
That is it my friend Eric she's unchangeable, I wish there is a spell of alchemy to morph her back into a young girl. My love for her rise each day I woke and the more I think the more it evokes. Thank you for the visit my friend.
Date: 11/13/2015 11:20:00 AM
So loving, touching and emotional! Your poem mirrors many of my own thoughts and feelings for my Moma. She is now 79 and slowly, gradually before my eyes, I am becoming the parent and she the child. Like your Mother, mine has always shown a generous heart and dedication to her children. I am touched and as sad as this 'phase' of life is, we are blessed they know who we are and they are healthy - (I pray your Mother is healthy). A very moving write ... CayCay ah, never, never, ever, dry
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Date: 11/14/2015 4:00:00 PM
Thank you for shopping my friend CayCay your pleasant comment is appreciated. May you fill with unending bliss and your mom live a long life. Stay blessed my friend.
Date: 11/11/2015 10:08:00 PM
Dear Afolabi What a wonderful tribute to your mom, I'm sure she is pleased with it, awesome my friend love the devotional inspirational feeling it brings worth very touching, bravo, and thanks for your review of my sunshines daughter, I wrote it for my oldest daughter and I, take care cheri hope you have a great week, and weekend!
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Date: 11/12/2015 2:41:00 PM
Thank you very much cherl your comment is much appreciated.
Date: 11/11/2015 7:55:00 PM
a truly beautifully painted tribute afolabi wishing you a blessed weekended
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Date: 11/12/2015 2:40:00 PM
I appreciate your visit.
Date: 11/11/2015 12:32:00 PM
Afolabi you honor your mother with such a loving write. Loved reading this my friend.
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:23:00 PM
Thanks a lot.
Date: 11/11/2015 10:53:00 AM
What a very beautiful poem and dedication not only to your mother but to all mothers! Great poem!
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:23:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 11/11/2015 10:18:00 AM
You recall all the magic that surrounded your youth and recognize that your mother was the source and inspiration for that magic. Your words are like a bouquet of flowers that brighten the senses and pay tribute to the love that was your mother. You have stored all the best your mother gave to you in your heart so that you may dispense it to others and they too can be touched by the experience. Emile.
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:22:00 PM
Your comment is appreciated Emile thanks a lot.
Date: 11/11/2015 9:47:00 AM
A truly wonderful poem my friend. A great tribute to your mother. It is so well written and greatly inspiring. A7 Adding this jewel to my fav list. Thanks..
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:21:00 PM
Think you.
Date: 11/11/2015 8:49:00 AM
Wonderful honor you bestowe on your mother..Not all young people praise their moms like this ..I enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my p age..Sara
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:20:00 PM
Thanks for the uplifting and encouraging words. Stay blessed my friend SARA.
Date: 11/11/2015 7:28:00 AM
Hi Afolabi: I was really in awe of your tribute to your mother. I especially loved the line , " My love for her is like he sea that will never dry." Great Write!
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Ralph for your lovely and uplifting comment.
Date: 11/11/2015 6:45:00 AM
Afolabi, one of your best writes in my opinion. Very good. The subject is beautiful and touching. Well thought out and good word choices. The last two lines are excellent!
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Date: 11/11/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 11/10/2015 5:53:00 PM
Hi Afolabi, what a beautiful tribute to your mother, if my sons or daughter wrote that about me I would be the proudest mother in the whole wide world, you deserve a seven ++++++ for that. take care........Vera
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Date: 11/10/2015 11:42:00 PM
Thank you for dropping by.
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Date: 11/10/2015 11:41:00 PM
The valuation of a mother is incomparable think you my friend for dropping by....stay blessed.
Date: 11/9/2015 3:49:00 PM
wow, amazing emotions of admiration and love for your mother. THis is just wonderful!!
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Date: 11/10/2015 1:50:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea.
Date: 11/9/2015 7:17:00 AM
A monument of superb beauty and love for the one who brought you to life! No words can ever describe the magnitude of her devotion to your wellbeing, my friend, A.M. A seven!
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Date: 11/10/2015 1:49:00 PM
Thank for dropping by sir your presence is appreciated.

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