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Frost Bite

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Frost Bite

The blades of winter grind into the ice
like blood on a bitten lip
two lovers spin and twirl

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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 5:48:00 AM
    Loved this on my first read Debi!Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/17/2013 3:54:00 AM
    Powerful write Debbie. Congrats!

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 10:52:00 AM
    Very vivid in details...strong kimo!! Congrats on your win !! Love watching the graceful ice skaters..

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:36:00 AM
    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 2/16/2013 5:27:00 AM
    congrats on your win Debbie

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:34:00 PM
    great entry Debbie, congrats on your win

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 7:31:00 PM
    Debbie.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Rick's "I'll Have One Kimo Please" have your self a goodnight~PD

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:10:00 PM
    Debs, this is one that was very unique and one that I had hoped would place high. Congratulations. Glad to see it again.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:43:00 PM
    Debbie, congrats on your win with this vivid kimo! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 3:15:00 PM
    Debbie congrats on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 9:15:00 AM
    I can picture this whole scenario! :) Slippery ice.....sliding into romance!

  1. Date: 1/31/2013 8:45:00 AM
    wonderful kimo. Hugs, Catie :)

  1. Date: 1/30/2013 7:20:00 PM
    Good one!!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 12:18:00 PM
    Not having seen a kimo poem before, I was interested to take a look at one, Debbie. I like the brevity of it, and the terse use of words. Those words in this poem painted a vivid picture. Thank you for your recent comment on my poem, "Memories Of You." Best wishes, Carl.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 4:46:00 AM
    lovely way with words:))))

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 7:22:00 PM
    and then perhaps 1 does slip, a falling through the ice, the bitter nip.... where is me anti-freeze?

  1. Date: 1/28/2013 6:59:00 PM
    REally nice one here!!! Love the graphic imagery.