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Friendship

FRIENDSHIP My friend, My soul’s double My being’s companion My heart’s beat My mind’s thought Your fears I share And you My hopes Alone aren’t we As next to each-other Proudly we stand Against all odds Twin towers of Trust Supporting one another, Asking for nothing Offering everything, As we vigilantly Guard Our future’s Undivided PATH! © Demetrios Trifiatis 27 January 2013

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/29/2015 8:33:00 AM

Wonderful tribute for those we lost that day when the Twin Towers went down 9/11

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/27/2013 4:53:00 PM

Lovely poem... only one comment! I think you meant "friend" and not "fiend" in the first line! LOL In my haste, I have often made that mistake! Otherwise, wonderful write... cheers, Jack

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/28/2013 1:10:00 AM

Thank you Jack! Of course I ment friend, otherwise the title would have been FIENDSHIP! Ha-ha! I truly appreciate your correction!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/27/2013 8:41:00 AM

Friendship is the spice of life! Just a note: should the last couple of lines read...as we vigilantly guard since vigilantly is an adverb? Just wondering...thanks for being my friend! :) Ese kalos philos gia mena...elpiza gia panta that ese konta mou! :) Philakia!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/27/2013 10:40:00 AM

Thank you for the correction. Originally I had written: "As we vigilantly are guarding" but I forgot are. Your indication is simpler and more correct. THank you! Eissai pragmatiki fili ke sagapo! Se parakalo stile mou tin electroniki sou diefthinsi! Filakia

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/27/2013 8:43:00 AM

Elpizo, eno! :(...Elpiza gia panta tha ese dipla mou....kalitera? Elenika then ena efkoli gia mena alla....ti omorphi glosa ena! Sorry If I'm butchering the Greek! I do love it so!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/27/2013 7:25:00 AM

Demetrios; This is awesome. I just love to read poems of friendship. Glad you are back. Many blessings. Lucilla

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/14/2020 1:21:00 AM

Thank you dearest of friends, Lucilla. Sorry for not having replied to you for that long! Be happy in heaven when we all are going to meet one day! Hugs xxx