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Below is the poem entitled Friend which was written by poet Mar Star. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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A friend ask me today.
I couldn’t explain,
I love you,
I don’t want you far,
I lust you cause I can’t help my hands,
You’re the sun to my shine,
The moon of my nights,
What I look forward to my every light,
I can’t seem myself without you,
I can’t be without freedom, yet I won’t impede yours either.
Don’t know what we got after all we’re just afar.
Let’s see what time has for us apart to let us grow far.

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  1. Date: 6/1/2012 10:06:00 AM
    Beautifully written!!

  1. Date: 6/1/2012 8:19:00 AM
    I have read 3 of your poems you have posted. I enjoyed reading them Marisabine. But....most people will only read one of them as you posted to many at one time. we try to read as many poets poetry as we can when we are able to be here at the soup. A lot of poets poems do not get read or seen even when one poet puts so many poems up at one time. I know you are new and so I just wanted to let you know these things. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

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    Date: 6/1/2012 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your advice, I truly appreciate it.