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the arc of this air rising like smoke amidst the nival flora of hills trails against gun-powder skies with barrels drawn my mind pivots in the anguish of yesteryear's pain i cower like this sun beneath clouds unwilling to lift the veil of eyes and see the crimson splatter awaken in the momentary flashes elapsing through triggered little thoughts that hold you in the corners of my mind somewhat confined by my pacific soul but still able to break free of these chains sometimes i see you there pointing more than fingers and i choke on the weight of hands pressing against my throat as i try to swallow down these tears sometimes i hear your uttered rage in the shots of darkness that echo along the halls of lonely walls where bullets once shattered my heart i still see the fear in my eyes as reflections stare back in momentary lapses of this wretched love that left me live yet die in its hands January 13, 2020 (aching)

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Date: 1/24/2020 12:32:00 AM
Congratulations, Sandra on your win. The other side of love.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/25/2020 4:44:00 PM
Thank you so much... the side of love no one cares to ever see... sadly it exists though... hugs
Date: 1/23/2020 10:05:00 AM
Way to go, a big hug and congrats!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/23/2020 10:19:00 AM
Thank you so much Rick... hugs
Date: 1/23/2020 7:12:00 AM
no other writer like you sweet Sandy :) Yet, another winner for me. Beautifully sad and full of ache for sure..thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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Date: 1/23/2020 10:18:00 AM
i know of one writer who writes similar my beautiful friend, because she too knows pain in depths like me... thank you so much for hosting the contest and for the win... hugs :)
Date: 1/23/2020 12:46:00 AM
Oh, this is beautiful - love it! Sincere congratulations for your awesome win in Lu Loo's challenging contest, Sandra - best wishes for 2020 and keep up the great work, my friend! Blessings to you and yours! :o) <3
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/23/2020 5:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and kind words Greg :) hugs and blessings
Date: 1/22/2020 7:35:00 PM
Congrats on your top win sandy!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/23/2020 5:05:00 AM
Thank you so much Brenda :)
Date: 1/22/2020 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Luloo's contest. I am very excited to see this beautiful poem sitting at the top.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/22/2020 6:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris... not sure how much beauty is within the darkness but your kind words shine bright :) hugs
Date: 1/15/2020 5:49:00 PM
Really outstanding imagery and metaphor Sandy! Congratulations on your win!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 7:12:00 PM
Thank you so much Sam :) hugs
Date: 1/14/2020 7:05:00 AM
The ending line spells the essence of this poem--I felt the emotions throughout as you described love and rage--great intensity in exquisite imagery--a sure win, Sandy.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/14/2020 8:15:00 PM
Thank you so very much Vijay...not so sure about a win but my emotions did come through in this one...hugs
Date: 1/13/2020 5:27:00 PM
this is a captivating sadness. it is beautiful in its simplicity and aching
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Date: 1/13/2020 6:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert... hugs
Date: 1/13/2020 1:32:00 PM
A remarkable writing you have done dearest , Sandra! Much liked. Hugs
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/13/2020 6:35:00 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios...i am honored :) hugs
Date: 1/13/2020 12:05:00 PM
Sandra, You have penned such a sad and dark write. My heart goes out to you my friend.Sending warm wishes your way- Alexis
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Date: 1/13/2020 6:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Alexis...it's buried past that comes forth for the muse... hugs and blessings :)
Date: 1/13/2020 11:48:00 AM
Such a deep and dark poem that begs my heart to wrap itself around you and whisper everything will be alright. Your words today are deeply felt my friend and the ache is real. Though I do prefer your love inspired poems the most, everything you write is amazing in my opinion.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 1/13/2020 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris... your comments always are so detailed and bring smiles with them...hugs :)

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