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Free Spirit

There are things I’ll never be Things that I’ll never know Places that I’ll never see Seeds that I’ll never sow But I reckon that’s ok I reckon it’s just as well For I now live in today Breaking addictions spell I’m happy with who I am I’m happy with my life For the Lord I’m a lamb A husband to my wife What has truly set my spirit free? I accepted Jesus Christ unto me

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Danielle Moreno

Date: 2/27/2009 5:15:00 PM

great job on your poem...........................................................danielle

Robin L. Gass

Date: 2/13/2009 10:20:00 AM

A beautiful sonnet that reflects the beauty of the writers soul. Wonderful, uplifting write, Michael! GBY Love, Robin

Brian Strand

Date: 2/12/2009 8:02:00 AM

You are indeed Michael.Rgds & thanks for your welcome comments

Michaela Payne

Date: 1/26/2009 9:04:00 PM

Michael this is absolutely beautiful, every word was wonderfully written. A free spirit you are. Blessings, ~Michaela~

John Tanaskow

Date: 1/26/2009 3:46:00 AM

and yet it crippled me.

Ronald Bingham

Date: 1/25/2009 12:41:00 PM

All we have to do is ask. Blessings, Ron

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 1/25/2009 3:39:00 AM

Amaen, Michael, and you are the most blessed of all, for all of these things, amazing heart and soul you've g0t my dear, love, Kristin

Janetta Harrington

Date: 1/24/2009 9:54:00 PM

michael, thanks for your comment. i guess sometimes we just have to blow off steam. i too know Jesus and i know he will help. you are a good guy and i really like your writings. i probably should complain in a diarly. i just want to get well so fast. janetta

Corinne Curcio

Date: 1/24/2009 2:23:00 PM

Wonderful!

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/24/2009 8:39:00 AM

Well presented , Free Spirit .....

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

Date: 1/24/2009 8:02:00 AM

this is very spiritual-great write ichael, I love reading your poems-Have not gotten to them all yet but your poems are from the HEART!-also thanks so much for letting me know about the correction I needed to make in Harmony!!!God Bless-Rhonda Hero

Brian Strand

Date: 1/24/2009 8:02:00 AM

Hi Michael ,Thank you for your kind words.My contest is for the English Sonnet form 10 syllables per line ,14 lines including the final couplet.Rgds Brian

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/24/2009 7:49:00 AM

Dearest Michael, an open, honest, personal and well written Sonnet from your heart of hearts. Spiritual, and filled with well deserved pride. So proud of you too, like everyone else is. So happy for your inner peace and joy, and so thankful you can share with your amazing poetry. Love you, Shar YF4L

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/24/2009 7:14:00 AM

Brother your stories are something to be heard. Thanks for commenting on my work.

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 1/24/2009 7:12:00 AM

Such a beautiful spiritual write, Michael. I loved this very much. Nigel

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/24/2009 7:07:00 AM

God Bless who you are today, Michael. Awesome poem...!! Beautiful sentiment! ~ Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/24/2009 7:03:00 AM

The poem coks Michael. The message of being happy, content no matter all the past failures is evident in this piece. Great write.