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i noticed an enticing gleam in your eyes a gleam that enunciated precisely what i needed to hear but somehow i was slow to recognize when i discovered what your stare made clear in those emerald orbs i saw your heart in in that stare were the words "my dear" that was when sweet began playing its part and forced far away forever my fear we shared a shadow under an old oak tree and a sweltering summer's day suddenly became cool under that old oad tree were found you and me when reality decided to break its rule the rule was that only time would tell yet the two of us needed no such time destiny took us to where divinity would dwell and a summer's day made so sublime that day you came as such a surprise while your emerald eyes became an exclamation mark but by then i wasn't so slow as to not recognize that you stood as a disclaimer to the dark (c)2012 ....PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

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Date: 2/6/2012 12:27:00 PM
Just correct two small typos in your work: in the second line of the second verse, you begin the line with "in in". You only need one. In the third line of the third verse, you said "...that old oad tree...". I believe you wanted to type "...that old oak tree...". We are all human. Everything else looks just great.
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Date: 2/6/2012 5:08:00 AM
Nice one Jeffrey, with out the usual anger. missed them x
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Date: 2/5/2012 10:54:00 PM
Great poem, Jeffry.Cheers, Maureen
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