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Forgotten Wordless woes Silenced a voice You no longer hear Forgotten You thrive Old school survive Grit and grind Your 9 to 5 bind Emotionally alive You thrive Silence Muse on mute My daily commute To forgotten lines And yesterday's rhymes In silence Why? What was my crime? What stole your time? What was more sublime Than my invisible ink Did you stop to think Promises are meant to prevail Over pain Forgotten I remain... So... utterly... forgotten

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Date: 8/1/2023 6:03:00 PM
You've definenatly have a muse on the loose.
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Date: 5/13/2021 5:35:00 AM
Not forgotten.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2021 7:03:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. Kind of you.
Date: 4/23/2021 12:48:00 PM
How are you dear Lady? Losing my dear husband hit me hard and I haven’t been around for nine months. I have missed so much here. You will never be forgotten sweet Eileen. I can relate to your words. Have a great day. Hugs and Blessings, Connie xxoo
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2021 7:04:00 AM
I'm so sorry to hear of your loss, dear Connie. May you find comfort in the memories and in his abiding presence there. Thank you for your kindness to me. It is much appreciated.
Date: 4/19/2021 4:35:00 PM
I'm sure your muse will come; -JT
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2021 7:07:00 AM
It's been a couple of rough months, JT. Thanks for the visit. I have not been writing too much. Maybe I will post something today. Hugs
Date: 4/12/2021 9:53:00 AM
It looks like you and I have been in the same boat, more-or-less: "muse on mute". You do have one thing wrong though ... you are not forgotten. Whether here, or taking a break, your presence still lingers in the words you've left behind. Nice to be reading from you again (I hope not all that ink is invisible).
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2021 7:15:00 AM
Hi, dear. So good of you to visit and post such a lovely comment. I've been struggling of late. It just seems there's no place for poetry. I'll try to post something today if I can. Hope all is well with you.
Date: 4/9/2021 7:59:00 AM
Yes I am well, a bit sad that I can’t hold my grandson. But we are thankful he and mom are healthy. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 4/7/2021 7:29:00 AM
Nice penning Eileen, so good to read your blessed pen again and so good to see you back. Nice rhyme and flow with good insight too. Take care and keep safe, blessings always,Gordon
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/3/2021 7:11:00 AM
Thanks, Gordon. Kind of you to visit. I keep trying to get back into the game here, but I find it so difficult to do. Hope all is well with you.
Date: 4/3/2021 7:29:00 PM
How can one forget, with words past and present of such meaning, so profound your poetry dear Lady, 'We are family' here on soup, where one's journey is but a circle that leads one back.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/4/2021 5:22:00 AM
Always good to have a visit from you, Harry. I'll try to come back little by little. I've missed the community spirit. Thanks for being a part of it. Hugs
Date: 4/3/2021 6:47:00 PM
Where have you been, Eileen? I haven't seen you for a while. Glad to have read this nice write of yours.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/4/2021 5:21:00 AM
Hi, Robert. Thanks for the visit. I've had a lot on my plate lately. The situation in Lebanon seems to be going from bad to worse. We don't have a government at the moment. There's an economic crisis. I've lost a dear friend to Covid. Just seems a bit too much to handle. I'll try to get back into the game here. Thank you for the kind words.
Date: 4/2/2021 2:51:00 PM
I think your much to memorable to forget dear Eileen, but sometimes we do feel forgotten, thank you for sharing your talented pen, with me, Love , and prayers, :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/3/2021 9:28:00 AM
Thank you, dear one. I've been a bit silent even on FB... somehow I seem lost for words... meaningful ones. Thank you for always being kind and gracious to me. Hugs
Date: 4/2/2021 7:02:00 AM
I don't know you well, but l'm looking forward to reading more of your poems. Such a beautiful write, Eileen:-) Loved it. Welcome back!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/3/2021 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Edward. I've read a blog or two of yours, but I've been reticent to comment. I have a lot going on at the moment. Hopefully I'll be able to get back into the game. Thank you for the warm welcome.
Date: 4/2/2021 6:09:00 AM
You are very hard (or near to impossible) to forget my dear friend. I am sure there are many who have been wondering about your rather long hiatus, and yet they wait in silence for your return. Welcome back Eileen <3 hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/3/2021 9:25:00 AM
Hello, dear collaborator. You know a bit of my struggles. I'm trying to get back into the game here, but... it's hard to jump back in. Unfortunately, I feel that here... if you don't have a write... you don't have a voice. It's not like the good old days. Maybe that's my perception. Dear ones like you are always in my heart.. whether I'm silent or not. Happy Easter. Wish I were again in Malta.
Date: 4/2/2021 1:53:00 AM
You most definitely are not forgotten, Eileen:) glad to see you back:) strong and deep poetry, delightful as always:)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/3/2021 9:22:00 AM
Thank you. I've been going through some hard times of late. I find it hard to write. Let's hope the clouds will pass. Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 4/1/2021 5:05:00 PM
Its SO wonderful to see you back Eileen you have always been such a great support to me especially in my early days on soup and when darren and i wrote as jadazzle, stay well my friend, hope you and the family are coping during such difficult times in the world, hugs jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2021 5:12:00 PM
Hi, dear. It's been hard times for me. I lost a dear friend to covid and its taken time to deal with that. My work load is heavy and I haven't been around here much. I'll try to write some more. Those were the good old days, weren't they... hugs
Date: 4/1/2021 3:49:00 AM
How could you ever be forgotten, my beloved friend, Eileen? Your verses would live forever in the heart and mind of your friends! Filakia! xxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2021 4:55:00 PM
Thank you, my dear philosopher. It has been a while, and I do feel strange in this place once again. Maybe I'll start posting a little more when able. Filakia
Date: 3/27/2021 8:52:00 AM
Lovely to see you again Eileen, hope you're keeping well. Tom
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2021 4:56:00 PM
Hi, Tom. Thank you for asking. I've been struggling for some time. Life hasn't been easy, but I'm hoping for better days to come.
Date: 3/27/2021 8:47:00 AM
WoW! Eileen, What a deep and well-written piece. You are not forgotten. I have missed you and your amazing pen. So glad to see you posting again:-) Alexis
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2021 4:57:00 PM
Thanks, dear. So sweet of you. I've been away for a bit. It's thoughtful people like you who make me want to come back. Hugs
Date: 3/27/2021 8:31:00 AM
- But you are not forgotten ... lovely written, Eileen :) - Hope all is well with you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2021 4:58:00 PM
Thanks, dear one. We are.... surviving. The situation in Lebanon is not easy at the moment. Sending you hugs
Date: 3/27/2021 7:15:00 AM
Definitely not forgotten. Hugs Rick.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2021 4:58:00 PM
Thanks, Rick. Hope you're well
Date: 3/27/2021 7:04:00 AM
A wonderful if sad soliloquy. Times when everyone seems to forget us. But we must be strong.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/1/2021 4:59:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. I'm trying to be strong, but life has been difficult lately. Thanks for the visit... and kind words

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