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Forgive Me My Heart

You left me in this cold dark storm, with shattered dreams, that dark clouds formed. Was I wrong to trust in you, or was it you, I never knew? Forgive me heart, what you went through. This heartache was caused, by only you. My heartaches for the love we shared, for it was you, who did not care! Michael Tor To all those that have lost a love, Hold on to your dreams for they will bring you love again...

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 5/18/2020 7:27:00 AM

You are true romantic and express love and heartache well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2017 6:25:00 PM

I enjoy your style, Michael and this is a touching poem.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/27/2017 11:29:00 PM

Your comments are uplifting and enjoyable to read Andrea gracias mi amiga...

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/17/2017 8:47:00 PM

Such an excellent heartfelt write Michael! Your poetic expression is sad, vulnerable and endearing. So emotive and so well done and heart-touching for the reader.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/19/2017 6:53:00 PM

Much appreciated..

Michael Tor
Date: 9/19/2017 6:52:00 PM

Thank you Susan.

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/27/2017 4:54:00 PM

You do not ask anything more of her love but that it be a part of your life. Depression has taken a hold of your thoughts and you need direction, not to understand your feelings, but to disarm their impact on your life. Good write my friend, Emile.

Michael Tor
Date: 8/27/2017 9:52:00 PM

Right on Emile. Thanks for the visit my friend.

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 8/25/2017 4:33:00 AM

This is such a powerful poem! I have experience heartbreak and pain a lot and I can really relate to it! Also, thank you for you encouragement Michael. Be blessed

Michael Tor
Date: 8/25/2017 11:34:00 PM

Your welcome Kudzai.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/24/2017 3:35:00 AM

I guess we all have experienced this at one time or another. It is sometimes so hard to recover from the experience of lost love, yet...your poem offers hope. :)

Michael Tor
Date: 8/24/2017 3:16:00 PM

Thank you Eileen for your wonderful insight.

Michael Tor

Date: 8/24/2017 12:49:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios for this welcome comment. Wonderful to see you and hear from you...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/24/2017 12:35:00 AM

So tender and beautiful song of the heart my dearest friend, Michael! Better to love and suffer than never to love! I am back just for today! Excellently done!