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Forever Loving

Sounds of a great mountain roar trembling echoes a shaking voice, flooding down the face a river of tears inside each drop treasured sparkling crystals pearl jewels weep. Brings new life honey as joy sweetly blushing desires your beauty , Crowned queen of the flies bouquet colors, a butterfly dances floats upon a sun lighting rays, touching inside with warm wings sweeping an angel. Sweet gently skipping desire hot pulse beats star lighting passion glows behind the jewels, baby you shine beautifully bright when the thunder roars beast of reality natures lion. Loves arrow strikes deeply blushing red under a pink moon , sweetly embracing together kissing forever spirit of the night sparkling always uniting under your love, when our dream becomes true into eternity hand in hand one masterpiece walking to paradise adoring the picture within you.

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Paul Schneiter

Date: 9/27/2014 1:18:00 PM

Dear Liam, This poem has breathtaking imagery and commendable flow. Moreover, it packs an emotional wallop. In short, I think it's wonderful. Thank you for creating it and posting it. * * * And thank you for your kind words about "Mother." Please know that I value and appreciate them.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/27/2014 1:36:00 PM

thank you paul truly deeply for the amazing beautiful comment smiling a mother is always a blessing deeply appreciated

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/24/2014 8:01:00 AM

I'm not sure which I enjoyed more, the poem or the tremendous comments it inspired. Bravo Liam.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/24/2014 8:19:00 AM

thank you richard smiling i enjoyed every last comment thank you deeply dear friend god bless

Gautami Phookan

Date: 9/24/2014 2:50:00 AM

Liam :) Love how you phrase your words,, your thoughts are very beautiful! '...under a pink moon'?.. Yours, it looks like an enchanting world,, I'm sure there must be wild lilies and blue violets too, and the last line.. I loved it so much!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/24/2014 8:15:00 AM

thank you gautami for the heart touching beautiful comment bless you it can be a magical world

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2014 3:18:00 PM

such a beautiful write Liam - a joy to read a 7 from me:-) Hugs Jan xx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 3:52:00 PM

thank you jan wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend bless you

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/23/2014 2:38:00 PM

so nice to feel this way ... I hope you always will [butterfly dances float - exquisite] Light & Love

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 2:49:00 PM

ahh debbie hope so too thank you deeply very beautiful comment god bless smiling

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/23/2014 8:45:00 AM

This is a beautiful write. An excellent read. Thank you.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 8:59:00 AM

ah maurice you're so very kind heartfelt appreciated god bless

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/23/2014 5:38:00 AM

My friend Liam, my yesterday's comment was prophetic as you became the poet of the day, a well-deserved victory! I am.... afraid there is going to be another one coming with this masterpiece of a poem! Congratulations my friend! Another 7!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2014 8:01:00 AM

ah demetrious brought tears to my eyes thank you from the bottom of my heart for being so kind heartfelt beautiful comment bless you