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Firs, oaks surround a path Flamboyant in hued tints, Forest of all dreamers Flinging its lush canvas. Fabric of buds explodes Flushed with nature's splendor; Flaming woods...evergreen! Pleadies -F Contest for Kim Merryman 9/25/2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2016 11:29:00 PM

So beautiful. I don't know your rating with the judge. but it's a very worthy win!!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/27/2016 3:43:00 PM

This F contest is very restrictive. Difficult and challenging. You did an excellent job with a tough task. Good luck with the contest. Lots of Love, armand.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2016 3:12:00 AM

- Nette, many congratulations on your great wins poems - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 5:23:00 PM

Fabulous Nette! Many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/26/2016 5:00:00 PM

Beautiful and creative imagery, Nette! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Love, Kim

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/26/2016 4:41:00 PM

Back with congrats on your placement, Nette.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/26/2016 5:25:00 AM

Fantastic! Good luck dear nette!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/25/2016 8:01:00 PM

Hi Nette....beautiful poem....deciduous forests like your photo begin in my State below the headwaters of the Mississipi, then south into Iowa, above the Headwaters, boreal forests prevale, my favorite places, jimbo

Pashang Salehi

Date: 9/25/2016 4:43:00 PM

Beautifully done... Good luck

Paul Callus

Date: 9/25/2016 3:39:00 PM

You use your paint brushes with capable strokes, Nette! I can imagine the beauty of your forest on canvas! Full marks to you! Hugs // paul

Lu Loo

Date: 9/25/2016 1:00:00 PM

Lovely imagery sweet Nette and I've always loved the color evergreen. ..good luck lovely lady :)-luloo

David Mohn

Date: 9/25/2016 11:02:00 AM

fabulous :)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/25/2016 10:45:00 AM

I love what you did with your F word and six syllables - very nice, Nette ... CayCay

Daniel Turner

Date: 9/25/2016 8:15:00 AM

I can smell the tree sap and hear the crunching twigs and leaves, Nette. Great write!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/25/2016 7:55:00 AM

A 7 for this excellent piece, Nette! Janice

Gabby Sabre

Date: 9/25/2016 7:05:00 AM

A verse that excels. I like all your lines as this is my dream forest. You have a natural flow in your gift of words!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/25/2016 5:33:00 AM

Beautiful pleiades, Nette. I am a hiker and love the woods. Good luck in the contest. Agnes

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2016 2:57:00 AM

- The nature is beautiful, take time to enjoy it - Lovely poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carly Lalion

Date: 9/24/2016 11:56:00 PM

I like to hike and stop to wonder at the many pleasures of a forest. This impeccable poem captures the splendor of nature's creation in your extraordinary metaphors!

James Peranteau

Date: 9/24/2016 11:25:00 PM

I felt as if I was strolling through my favorite Forest dear poet friend of mine!, Save....I somehow missed those beautiful F F F ferns...*sm Great write Nette...missed ya....much love, james