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for stephanie

this is not what i wanted
this pain in my heart
all i do is wonder
is there pain in her heart
this dark cloud i'm under
follows me day and night
and there's something inside of me
screaming somethings not right
this is not lonliness 
but something new
this is how i feel
when i cannot be with you

(inspired by, "Better, The Devil You Know")

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  1. Date: 6/8/2012 11:10:00 AM
    A nice entry for the contest. love phyl

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 10:08:00 AM
    You are always inspiredwhen it comes to great poetry that rips the heart out. Another poem that says love could be kinder.

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 9:12:00 PM
    Good writing, john!

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 7:48:00 PM
    stefanie got busted today, by yours truely. i'm not going to blackmail her. i'll just let her keep her disease to herself. no more poems for that addict. she made me a liar to myself.

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 5:52:00 AM
    So profound and sad, John. yet love the sincerity.

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Sad - Wish you all the best. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 10:58:00 AM
    if it can be corrected ,correct it,if it cant,find a shoulder,get it out of your system and begin to rebuild,do this after praying

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 3:20:00 PM
    pd made a freudian slip lol you're never too old for snakes n ladders, not the way I play it anyway :-)

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 8:03:00 AM
    lovely John I feel your pain in this.

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 6:52:00 PM
    that is get hit hard

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 6:51:00 PM
    John, no reason,,, to feel is love... either you get hard, or BITE hard... anyways, I say, go for it. Even if it was you know who inspired this poem... Stephanie, probably see something in you the devil put does that make sense to you. maybe she has a dark-er cloud above her... and doubt will get you no where... so, go with both mix feelings,,, you only live once... besides, maybe you can heal her.... maybe she is God sent... xox...pd

    Date: 5/30/2012 6:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sence you know me so well. What did the devil put in me?
  1. Date: 5/29/2012 12:25:00 PM
    yes, sadly true

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 12:20:00 PM
    A sad feeling poem. Hope you are not truly sad.

    Loving III Avatar John Loving III
    Date: 5/29/2012 12:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    just scared