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For My Family and Friends

For My Family And Friends If you are sitting here listening to these words, it's because I am not of this world anymore. I am still here - you just can't see me. To you my children - I want to say, that I loved you with all my heart. I never had riches in this world. My biggest treasure was having you all. You were the treasure that God gave me and I took care of you the best way that I could. Let God comfort your soul and wipe away your tears, than go on with your lives. Today I must take a journey but I must do it alone. My job here has been done. I am now going to a better place. Please don't cry for me, I have not died. I have only started a new life. Time will heal your pain. Try to live a righteous life, stay close to Jesus and you will be close to God. We will see each other again, when you climb the golden stairs. I will meet you there. To my family and friends, I want to say thank you for all the years ant times we spent together. The times we laugh and the times we cried. As we all know, everything comes to an end and now I must say my last goodbye. From above I will ask my Lord Jesus to bless each and everyone of you...
08/19/2014 By Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: My best friend asked me to write something for her. This is what I wrote I hope you like it. It will also be in Spanish....

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Date: 8/25/2014 2:46:00 PM
and a SEVEN Rate, Straight from HEAVEN! I am moved by this Extraterrestrial POEM!~ ....It is brighter than the sun, and will out burn the stars!~an Instant favorite!
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Date: 8/25/2014 2:43:00 PM
OH YES, YOU HAVE PLENTY OF RICHES< dear Daughter of the Earth and Stars. YOu will LIVE onward, smearing the cosmos with your angelic shine, a million miles of neon Laughter, Here, there, beyond, and past the ever after!~ FOR YOU, A quick stream of consciousness, FROM ME. I send love and peaceful tranquility for you and yir everlasting familia!~ To and through, there's you, the gods and the glowing moon! FOREVER! IT is your blessed endeavor! Print these words and keep them nearby, when u get down
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/25/2014 6:10:00 PM
Thank you J. I was not expecting such nice comment. You have a way with words that makes me feel good and like I am not wasting my time. Blessings always.
Date: 8/25/2014 1:54:00 PM
a beautiful write. thank you.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/25/2014 6:06:00 PM
Thank you Maurice, I will visit you again.
Date: 8/25/2014 5:25:00 AM
This is beautiful! The words flow straight from the heart. I love the second stanza best. Friends, family, shared laughter and shared tears are better than any material riches we could accumulate.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/25/2014 11:29:00 AM
Thank you Monterey; I am glad that you liked this. My best friend asked me to write something for her to be read when she passes away.
Date: 8/24/2014 3:19:00 AM
Lucy that is beautiful, what a lovely thing to write, you are such a wonderful person and I am so glad we have found you, god bless you my dear, the lord did us all a favour when he put you on this earth, take care my dear friend, will SM you shortly.............Vera..........
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/24/2014 7:32:00 PM
Hi Vera; I am so glad that you liked it. it is hard to find comforting words when someone passes away.
Date: 8/23/2014 4:34:00 AM
A treasure of advise made in heaven given by a soul filled with God's love and wisdom! My dearest friend, Lucy, linger with us a little bit longer for your presence you still need! Love you!
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/23/2014 4:20:00 PM
Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. I might just stay a while longer.
Date: 8/23/2014 2:29:00 AM
A Champion of Faith, a source of love and courage you are Lucilla...J.A.B.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/23/2014 4:18:00 PM
Thank you Justin for these lovely words.
Date: 8/21/2014 3:26:00 PM
I will give you a 7 rating Lucilla for a beautiful and touching poem and ..... for making my heart skip a beat:) God bless you; take care; gracias e te mando un abrazo. // paul
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/21/2014 4:15:00 PM
Gracias Paul; How do you know Spanish? This poem is also in Spanish. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 8/20/2014 9:53:00 PM
Dear Lucilla: Lovely, simply lovely. A wonderful message from your heart. I am sure your friend must be very happy that you wrote this. Thanks. Leon
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Date: 8/20/2014 8:49:00 PM
Such a beautifully written goodbye....Sad she has to leave. I wish your friend an easy journey... Warm wishes :) Ana
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Date: 8/20/2014 5:34:00 AM
- It's always sad to lose their loved one ..... goodbye .... for so long ..... until we meet again .... - It's been three years since my mother died ..... and Sometimes I think, "today I will make a phone call to my mother" ....... never give a hug .... never say "I love you" ..... loss and tears .... But , one thing is for sure everyone will do this "journey"... alone - A deep and powerful poem dear friend Lucilla! - Wish you a nice Wednesday - Bless you! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/20/2014 1:02:00 PM
Thank you Anne Lise for reading this. My friend has been asking me for a long time to do this for her. She had to raise her kids by herself.
Date: 8/20/2014 5:33:00 AM
Sad. Well penned.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/20/2014 1:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Ravi.
Date: 8/19/2014 11:34:00 PM
How beautifully penned my dear....thoughts and prayers going out....hugs Tim
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/20/2014 12:03:00 AM
Tim; Thank you so much for being here for me. I will visit you L:ater.
Date: 8/19/2014 10:35:00 PM
OH...Lucilla!!! Thank you for that note at the end....My heart dropped. Oh...it is a beautiful write for your friend. So sad that she is facing this...You are so right, though...a better world is what we who believe have to look forward to. Sending you my love, my sweet.
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Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 8/20/2014 12:06:00 AM
Thanks Eileen; We have been friends for over 40 years. I will visit you later.

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