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The day I left Madrid, I waved goodbye to someone dear to me. I still can see his dark brown eyes that could not tell a lie, those same eyes I’d beheld so tenderly each day when he would show up at my door. Where is my friend Eduardo, whom I left behind so long ago and never more would see again? I know he was bereft from letters that he sent, and I replied that we would meet again. I could not know how wrong I was or if he ever cried for me. How easily I let him go! How innocent and beautiful was he! And he remains so - in my memory. For the Soulful Words Poetry Contest of Kim Morrison

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/9/2020 8:30:00 PM
Ah, this one brings to mind memories of a sweet friend I made when I was in the Philippines in 1982. Never saw her again, though we wrote several letters. Excellent sonnet, and wistful thoughts portrayed of youth. "How easily I let him go" just tugs at the heart. Congrats on your win today!
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Date: 2/8/2016 11:23:00 AM
Andrea, this is so enduring and lovely and sad. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/8/2016 8:32:00 AM
A real heartfelt poem Andrea! Congratulations! :) -HANS
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Date: 2/6/2016 7:33:00 PM
I have an Eduardo I left behind in Italy Andrea. Only his name was Angelo. Your poem brought back those memories of my youthful love. We were an ocean apart. I love this soulful poem Andrea. Big well deserved Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/6/2016 5:48:00 PM
this is one of my favorites..beautifully written ..Congrats. B
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:29:00 PM
what wonderful memories to treasure forever - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:34:00 PM
Hi Andrea, congratulations on this beautiful Sonnet you wrote as a tribute to your dear friend. Very heartfelt and sweet. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:34:00 AM
congrats.... skat
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Date: 2/6/2016 4:14:00 AM
Hi Andrea. Congrats for your poem's top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:00:00 AM
Andrea, another top, win, In Royal's contest. Congratulations on your "Heartfelt poem." Take Care ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/12/2014 5:06:00 AM
True memories hv an unbearable beauty,, guy must hv been quite a fortunate one,, congrats on fine win Andrea // Upma//
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Date: 7/11/2014 10:18:00 PM
This is a beautiful piece Andrea...Kim
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Date: 1/15/2014 2:17:00 PM
Andrea, I remember reading this amazing poem a long time ago,, enjoyed it again! Congrats on your fabulous win! love
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Date: 1/15/2014 1:59:00 AM
congratulations!
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:02:00 PM
Enjoyed the write on Platonic relationships and congratulations on the fine win, Andrea
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:07:00 AM
Andrea,a wonderful poem.Congratulations. great win.(: ) Jenish.
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Date: 6/15/2013 10:38:00 AM
Andrea, A touching glimpse of this long lost friendship. Glad to have found this today on the "Top 100 Most Recent" HAve a great day :)
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Date: 6/12/2013 9:46:00 PM
Ah the memories will never go away. A wonderful sonnet Andrea. love phyl
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Date: 6/5/2013 10:01:00 AM
Is this a true story? If yes, I am so sorry. Love, daver
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Date: 5/30/2013 6:46:00 AM
I read this sonnet over and over, while listening to Bach's Suite for Solo Cello No. 1 in G Major, Prelude. Perfect music for a perfect sonnet. A very tasty treat Andrea.
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Date: 5/29/2013 12:32:00 AM
WOW, you live in Madrid ? Cool,,, did you ever see a bull fight ?,,,, very romantic poem congrats on the win ;}
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Date: 5/28/2013 6:16:00 AM
Wow Andrea what an emotional poem, loved it was a deservedly first place...Seren
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Date: 5/26/2013 8:42:00 AM
...Congrats, Andrea!! Very deserving of this win...
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Date: 5/26/2013 8:39:00 AM
I was lost in the lines of this very tender, deeply emotional sonnet. Sad yet so beautiful, Andrea. And they say you never really lose someone you've truly loved... with fondness, gautami
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Date: 5/25/2013 3:04:00 AM
How sweet, Andrea...Congrats on your win with this lovely sonnet! It is so captivating...
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