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Footprints

Hiding the veil of moon light Amber gold sun's rays *** burst*** Bringing the arc of a new dawn Glistening white snow ****reflects*** Like sparkling diamonds Dotting the landscape ***shining*** Open skies above Not a cloud in the sky ***footprints*** Imprinted a pathway on jewel coated snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/20/2015 11:13:00 PM
I love the clever formatting of this one!
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Date: 1/21/2015 2:24:00 PM
This is a lovely little poem, Phyllis. It absolutely radiates pure white brilliance...Excellent!! :) john.
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Date: 1/21/2015 1:24:00 PM
You have a good sense of rhythm and place feelings into your word choices. Emile.
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Date: 1/21/2015 1:14:00 PM
- Phyllis, beautiful shiny footprints in white snow - Lovely winter picture - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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