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FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, PICTURE TAKEN BY ME, (c)

One has closely to follow the pace of his age for if behind falls, difficult would be life to enjoy! (c) Demetrios Trifiatis 26 August 2016

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Joe Dimino

Date: 9/17/2016 5:08:00 AM

Short but precise. For sure. Live in the moment. Past cannot be changed; and future should be positive direction, but never a substitute for all that is near to love.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/15/2016 6:10:00 PM

demetrios, so nice to read you again.. true, keep fit, be young!.. huggs

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 9/15/2016 5:42:00 PM

Thanks for the inspirational write, sir.........A.M.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/12/2016 4:14:00 PM

Keep on writing these words of wisdom Demetrios - have had a short break myself - hope you are well:-) hugs Jan xx

Jannie Breedt

Date: 9/10/2016 7:22:00 AM

I try to catch up. Not so easy. Thank you for the advice

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/10/2016 3:49:00 AM

Dear DT. 100% right my philosopher friend. Ur words are smelling like the flowers of ur roof garden...........//:) hugs//Manmath.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/1/2016 2:12:00 AM

Excellent.Well said. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/30/2016 7:10:00 PM

Hi Demetrios, I agree with your wise words. Nice to see you back my friend: -) Alexis

David Smith

Date: 8/30/2016 6:27:00 AM

Don't think I have two days same as far as recognising how old I am but mostly feel about half my age. Definitely not a straight line. Know what you mean though. keep those one liners coming. Your Kiwi friend as always