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Fog Gently Floats

Fog gently floats 'pon angel wings Lightly touching everything 'Pon the last rose of summer falls Burgundy velvet kissing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/8/2013 11:23:00 AM
Very pretty piece and I especially enjoyed the brevity; it flowed nicely. Great read; thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 9/3/2013 12:40:00 PM
Sara, imagery perfect... PD
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