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Flowers On the Water

I saw this beautiful wreath of flowers floating on the water. Where did it come from I ask, and where is it going. I found out it came from a lonely girl who was going home. She had heard a legend and threw it because it was a tradition. Ah, Hawaii, beautiful land where we all dream of going someday. Paradise they say and many of you have been already. Her wreath was floating back to shore, and she was happy. Her love was still in Hawaii and this meant that she would return. Oh how she longed to be with him and to smell the flowers on the island. Orchids were her favorite and she longed to see them once more. Her ship was now miles out to sea and what was that on the water. Someone's wreath was floating out to sea and she felt their pain. Grief was in her heart because she realized that if the legend was true, Someone would never return to this lovely paradise. Tears were falling down her face as she realized that she was leaving. Farther and Farther away she was going from her love. In her heart though she knew that springtime would come again. The flowers would bloom again and she would be with her love forever. By Jimmy Anderson for Francine Roberts "Flower" contest

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Date: 2/22/2011 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations Jimmy on your win in Francine Robert's contest "Flowers". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2011 12:29:00 PM
Hi Jimmy - Congratulations on your deserved WIN in Francine's "Flower" contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 2/1/2011 8:10:00 AM
A different kind of flower poem, but so beautifully written! Congratulations Jimmy!
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Date: 2/1/2011 5:57:00 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your wonderful win in the Flowers contest with this impressive write and win luv... enjoy another chart topping and well deserved win ... with luv..
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Date: 1/31/2011 9:13:00 PM
Excellent, Jimmy! A beautiful story! Thanks for reminding of my own trip to the Islands! The Punch Bowl and the battleship Arizona on Memorial Day! Very moving indeed! The flowers at the cemetery were out of this world beautiful! Congratulations! RAY
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Date: 1/31/2011 8:39:00 PM
Hey,you took and made quite a story out of flowers, Jimmy, very nice. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:32:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Jimmy
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:27:00 PM
What a lovely story behind your poem, Jimmy. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:14:00 PM
lovely story you've penned Jimmy congrats on your 7th place win in my contest
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Date: 1/28/2011 6:59:00 PM
JAM,, Another beautiful submission! Serene....Totally enjoyed...Best of luck in the contest! Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/28/2011 7:00:00 AM
Knew u would relate Jimmy to my Who Cares? as I wrote from the heart today.. good luck in the contest ..luv..
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Date: 1/27/2011 10:28:00 PM
Wow this is very beautiful and the story was very enchanting. Truly a wonderful journey.
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Date: 1/27/2011 7:04:00 PM
Have you ever seen the 1953 movie "From Here to Eternity". Your work reminds me of the closing scenes of the film. This is pervasively descriptive.
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Date: 1/27/2011 3:17:00 PM
Hi Jimmy -- this is quite beautiful. A lovely story of hope. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem 'Mocking the Raven'. If you've time, perhaps you would read it again. I had the idea for the story in my head for some time and posted it from my phone; it badly needed editing, which I have now done. Perhaps you would let me know what you now think of it. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 1/27/2011 12:33:00 PM
this is really beautiful Jimmy...best of luck in the contest...love,Deb
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