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Flowers of Life

I don’t have much concern for flowers now For it is ice and mist in my garden The pale green grass does not understand how To shake off the sucking cold snow burden My larks look shabby and the thrushes sad No effort to get some good sun succeeds The hazy climate for the mood is bad For some sun in glistening ice misleads Me to fresh rhododendrons in your smiles From your white teeth toward my empty tree Prodding me in a pursuit for some miles In the frost suddenly a morning spree Flowers on the river shore never fade However time tries to be on grass blade ____________________________________ 21 August 2016

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Date: 8/26/2016 7:13:00 AM
Congratulations; this is a lovely sonnet.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/26/2016 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Agnes ...
Date: 8/26/2016 5:28:00 AM
Probir, very well deserved winning entry. Congratulations!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/26/2016 8:16:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/25/2016 7:53:00 PM
Probir, congratulations on your fine placement in the contest for your lovely Sonnet. Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/25/2016 9:01:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/25/2016 12:16:00 PM
Totally reflects your skill Probir. Loved the piece!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/25/2016 9:06:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 8/21/2016 6:32:00 AM
- Beautifully written with a slightly sad feeling ..... however, your flowers will bloom again, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/21/2016 11:14:00 AM
I have not spoken of my flowers ... Anyway, thank you for liking ...
Date: 8/21/2016 2:15:00 AM
Tender feelings the heart expresses with the mastery of your pen dear, Probir! Excellent my friend!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/22/2016 5:36:00 AM
It is my comment my friend, not yours, Haha! I mean it!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/21/2016 5:42:00 AM
'Tender feelings the heart expresses' is okay, but 'the mastery of pen' cannot be agreed to ... Be that as it may, thank you ...
Date: 8/21/2016 12:21:00 AM
Such a beautiful sonnet!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/21/2016 12:26:00 AM
Thank you ...

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