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Somehow a scene from girlhood days Will flit across my hazy mind; To lead me down enchanting ways I thought I had once left behind Of Grandma's touch… so sweet and kind. Her garden floats on dappled stream Where trees callow burst into leaf, Our hands gather the blooms, agleam Which paint a view though spring turns brief-- Yet in my heart… I find relief. English Quintain Contest Sponsor: Janice Canerdy Re-submitted 7/19/2017

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Date: 8/2/2017 6:31:00 PM
This is so lovely , Nette, ... Congratulations on your win ... ~*
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Date: 8/2/2017 4:05:00 PM
So lovely, Nette! Congrats,
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Date: 8/2/2017 9:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Nette. Beautiful memory!
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Date: 8/2/2017 12:41:00 AM
Nette, CONGRATS on your win. Thanks for entering your great poem in my contest! Janice
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Date: 9/30/2015 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations....Cloud 9 did it again!
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Date: 9/29/2015 8:39:00 PM
Hi Nette... Nice win. SKAT
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Date: 9/29/2015 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your Quintain contest win..from the looks of it this beautiful poem has been on a contest journey..
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Date: 9/29/2015 9:29:00 AM
Congrats on the win Nette, beautiful, as always.
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Date: 9/29/2015 6:47:00 AM
Lovely write that is somehow a delicate feel. I enjoyed it very much and congratulate you on your contest placement ... CayCay
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Date: 9/29/2015 3:07:00 AM
Such a lovely Quintain that offers a peek into your girlhood days within the beauty of your Aunt's garden, Nette. Contrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/29/2015 2:10:00 AM
Nette, congrats on portraying girlhood days!
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Date: 9/29/2015 1:14:00 AM
Very wonderful quintain nette! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Date: 9/29/2015 12:15:00 AM
Nette, congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:48:00 PM
Congratulation nette on your win!
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Date: 9/28/2015 10:39:00 PM
congrats nette, great job, well deserved win in the contest
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Date: 9/28/2015 12:40:00 AM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write nette!
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:52:00 PM
this was simply splendid AlL i can think is that whatever contest this was in before was super selective??? Geeez. Congrats for your win this time!
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Date: 9/27/2015 6:59:00 PM
Nette,congratulations on your win!!!!Enjoyed reading. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/27/2015 8:43:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette!
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Date: 8/24/2015 3:50:00 PM
What a fabulous story; you penned this story a great. I love how it was constructed and your descriptive within is eloquent. Good luck in the contest.............A.M.
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Date: 8/24/2015 7:52:00 AM
Soothing the heart, vivifying the senses, inspires the mind, dear Net! A seven.
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Date: 8/23/2015 11:56:00 PM
That you can lead us all down this path, is the mark of an enchanting poetess!!! Loved this!
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Date: 8/23/2015 8:02:00 PM
nette, oh you used one of my favourite words, dappled, so beautifully penned by a beautiful poet, a7 and thanks for visiting my poem, cabin . . .
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Date: 8/23/2015 6:39:00 PM
Hello nette... a nice tribute to your aunt as you take us down memory lane - Lindsay
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Date: 8/23/2015 5:50:00 PM
The beauty of the real flower, your aunt, blooms through your magnificent poem.Nostalgic quill in fluid ink!
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