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Floating Balloons Visual Five

Watch them ....float on soft breeze, above a water fall, soon their journey will bring them down to earth.

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/15/2015 2:51:00 PM

So nice to read your verse this chilly Sunday afternoon. I'm supposed to let balloons fly for Chinese new year next week brrrr! Light & Love

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/12/2015 2:38:00 PM

Enjoyed this 'down to earth' write Richard & thanks for the comments..'

Skat A

Date: 2/1/2015 2:28:00 PM

RICHARD, CONGRATULATIONS on your win *Love Sweet* SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/29/2015 11:06:00 PM

Amazing write Richard! Congrats on big win!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/30/2015 9:22:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Upma.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/28/2015 8:18:00 AM

My imagination rises with your lovely balloons, Richard...congrats on your win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/30/2015 9:18:00 AM

Thanks and a big hug back to you.

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/27/2015 2:43:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on the win... nad!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/30/2015 9:20:00 AM

Thanks Nadiya.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/26/2015 12:21:00 PM

My friend, just circling back to offer my huge congratulations on your win and to enjoy reading this excellent piece once again! Pandita.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/30/2015 9:17:00 AM

Thanks Pandita.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/26/2015 11:13:00 AM

Back with merited congratulations, Richard! Expected to see this one higher up! // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/30/2015 9:16:00 AM

I must admit I had hoped my baloons would have floated a bit higher. It seems they were destined to stay closer to earth.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2015 4:17:00 PM

this painted a lovely picture for me, Richard. Congrats in my contest.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/25/2015 4:23:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, how might I have improved on it?

David Mohn

Date: 1/25/2015 3:55:00 PM

Congrats Richard...love the feel of this

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/25/2015 4:21:00 PM

Thanks David.

Joseph May

Date: 1/25/2015 3:52:00 PM

Nicely done...congrats on the win

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/25/2015 4:21:00 PM

Thanks Joseph.

Rob Carmack

Date: 1/25/2015 2:54:00 PM

I almost wrote on this pic too. Congrats Richard on the placement and a perfect poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/25/2015 4:24:00 PM

You are kind, thanks Rob.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/25/2015 2:51:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/25/2015 4:24:00 PM

Thanks Jan, hugs ack to you.

James Peranteau

Date: 1/21/2015 1:24:00 PM

This write takes me back to the....Red Balloon ! Do ya remember that....*smiles* Have a blessed day dear poet ! Much love, james

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2015 4:32:00 PM

Thanks for the blessing James.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/21/2015 9:45:00 AM

Dreams are like balloons that float high up...but when disillusion arrives, we're brought back to earth with a bump! #7 // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2015 9:48:00 AM

Thanks Paul, I appreciate the visit and the 7!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/21/2015 7:13:00 AM

That great Richard this "down to earth" feeling. Love

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2015 7:29:00 AM

Thanks Rajat.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/20/2015 2:36:00 PM

You painted a vibrant picture with your words. I can just see the balloons dancing in the wind. I hope they are yellow balloons.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2015 6:29:00 PM

Of course! *lol*

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/20/2015 1:11:00 PM

Captivating imagery that makes the heart with the balloons float above the waterfall of poetry, dear Richard! Good luck!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2015 6:30:00 PM

Thanks Demetrios.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/20/2015 10:27:00 AM

I too love the imagery here, Richard also the poetry

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2015 10:35:00 AM

Thanks so much Harry!;0)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/20/2015 7:01:00 AM

How beautiful! The imagery is fantastic and I can see those balloons floating away in slow motion... my friend you are a true artist! This is a winner in my books! Pandita.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2015 7:47:00 AM

I hope you are right Pandita, thanks.

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/19/2015 9:10:00 PM

I like this poem! I think, hoewever, you should have just called it "Floating Balloons" Keep it up! Best Matthew Anish

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2015 7:48:00 AM

Thanks Matthew.

Poesy Relish

Date: 1/19/2015 3:05:00 PM

Does justice to the picture... well written Richard... best wishes for the contest.... nad!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2015 7:50:00 AM

Thanks Nad.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/19/2015 2:16:00 PM

I always wanted to fly in a hot air balloon...your words flow with the picture

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2015 7:51:00 AM

Thanks Tim. I would like to give it a try as well.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/19/2015 12:20:00 PM

A beautiful imagery.makes me think of the word Splash : ).

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2015 7:47:00 AM

Thanks Chamaine.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2015 12:14:00 PM

Very clever write Richard - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/20/2015 7:46:00 AM

Thanks and a big hug for you as well.