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Flightless

Through the open panes I ponder a nightingale lost in flight singing to me a soulful song Her beak barely quivers but her sound it resonates deep waiting for me to gain my wings But I am flightless even my thoughts are capped in a bottled-up breeze I long to feel again freedom amongst a pristine sky Come into my window and help me float away if only through waning eyes Be the pull to my push and in such a time in such a florid time these wings will once more flap

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Date: 10/29/2016 7:16:00 PM
Beautiful, I think Broken Wings would really love this poem!
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Date: 10/29/2016 6:49:00 AM
Sometimes the mind can be a birdcage with no door. I can relate to this one, Tim. Deeper than it reads:)
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Date: 10/28/2016 5:38:00 PM
Tim this is such a heartfelt poem. Beautifully written :)
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Date: 10/28/2016 2:53:00 PM
Your heart has got the wings of love and can fly over any distance for her to find, my dearest friend, Tim! So romantic and inspiring my friend!
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Date: 10/28/2016 1:40:00 PM
May everyones wings flap and fly into a pristine sky...to live his /her dream..free and happily. We all feel flightless at times...But till We know we can fly..nothing is impossible.. Sad yet with a hope tobe happy..Such a great start is Hope.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2016 1:51:00 PM
Hope is good. Sometimes we feel trapped and need a little help becoming free. Thanks Charma
Date: 10/28/2016 8:51:00 AM
This awesome write depicts a serious longing for something...and I hope those wings once more flap.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2016 1:48:00 PM
Thanks AO...I do hope so as well
Date: 10/28/2016 8:33:00 AM
I love this neat poem. It has great lines. Especially this: "Be the pull to my push // and in such a time // in such a florid time // these wings will once more flap"
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2016 1:47:00 PM
Thanks so much Darren
Date: 10/28/2016 8:23:00 AM
Such a beautiful poem Tim. This on feels so good to read, free and easy but still with a hint of longing and desire.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/28/2016 1:46:00 PM
Thanks Chris for stopping by.

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