Flew Away

Bliss had promised her Contentment he delivered Away the dream flew! © Demetrios Trifiatis 09 November 2015

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A. Juman

Date: 11/9/2015 7:26:00 PM

Perfection--Demetrios perfecto you got it my friend

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2015 8:20:00 AM

Welcome my new friend! Hope you be happy with us here and to enjoy the company of our many good poets, women and men! Thank you for your warm comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2015 2:57:00 PM

- Lovely, but sad when dreams are flying away ..... always have dreams - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2015 8:18:00 AM

Yes, I agree, dear one! We have to be careful and try to keep our dreams as close as we can to our possibilities. Thank you , dear Anne-Lise for your precious visit and comment!

Theresa Cw

Date: 11/9/2015 2:12:00 AM

I also agree with what Kim has said below, Demetrios. Have a fantastic week ahead. hugs Theresa

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2015 8:15:00 AM

Delighted to see you again my good friend, Theresa. Thank you so much for your visit and comment!

Kp Nunez

Date: 11/9/2015 2:08:00 AM

Bliss in a romantic haiku. Have a great week, sire. Kim

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2015 8:14:00 AM

Kim, my dearest, thank you very much for your beautiful visit and comment! Have a great week you too!