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Fleeing Anguish

As fires rage in the huge town of Anguish Many a soul perishes among all the flames Burning to charred remnants of their trial Until just one comes along to then effect change He arrived unnoticed, he blended in well He, too, was unsure of his role in this land The people all knew him, for it was foretold That the fires would end with a touch of his hand Many had followed him along all the streets Supporting his mission, his efforts to quell He knew he was gaining power over the fires As he rescued those in Anguish, from the flames of Hell Through time and through thought he then came aware His mission was clear, to end the town’s plight He suppressed all the fires, released them from Anguish As he led the people out, to the town of Delight Now, Delight wasn’t far off, but yet distant enough As it took only one to show the people the route For those who supported, they followed along And lived out their lives without worry and doubt

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/9/2008 6:39:00 AM
Biblical. Only the names are changed. This was an interesting write. Vince
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Date: 7/6/2008 6:46:00 PM
Nice write Micheal. I am glad that the soup is finally up and running. Today is the first day I could get back on the site. Look forward to reading more of your poems. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/4/2008 10:00:00 AM
So very well written with a melodius ring to it. Very enjoyable read, well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 7/3/2008 10:10:00 PM
This was the best poem I have read of yours. I love stories in poetry, and you kept my attention from beginning to end. This was a supurb Quatrain and highly creative by using the words anguish and delight as nouns rather than adjectives. Love, Ivy
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Date: 7/3/2008 11:07:00 AM
outstanding write my friend and you have to read deep to catch this concept message was conveyed nicely everytime I want to give up I feel a surge to keep fighting and thats what me doing but think the other guy is up on me in the fight thanks for the encourgment to fight keep up the excellant writting sweet blessings
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Date: 7/3/2008 10:12:00 AM
Very epic like, but very wise also. Has a hopeful mood and feeling to this. Beautifully and thoughtfully written. -Sara:)
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