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Flamed Tulips

with just the lightest opening of mouths, hundred stars flame red tulips

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/24/2014 10:56:00 PM

Pardon the pun this is brilliant, love this one Nette.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/24/2014 3:25:00 AM

Captivating! It speaks volumes dear nette!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/23/2014 3:57:00 PM

An outstanding haiku.I read so many poems of yours ,but I rwmember the first write of yours that I read was a Christmas haiku ,and afzer reading it I was so impressed,I started following your writes.Very beautiful and creative Nette.Charma

James Fraser

Date: 9/23/2014 2:59:00 PM

The Princess's artistry through her pen, reminds me of the Tulip Farms in Holland, James :)

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/23/2014 12:01:00 PM

nicely painted vision beautifully penned

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/23/2014 9:59:00 AM

this is so creative alright, it jumps right off the page into one's mind..

Norma Arana

Date: 9/23/2014 7:50:00 AM

What a kiss can do! From mouths to two-lips like what Andrea said. First-rate poem from a talented poet!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2014 12:03:00 AM

Vivid imagery of those glorious tulips!! It's like a take on the homonym; Two lips!!

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/22/2014 7:49:00 PM

Wow, what a vibrant combo of two gorgeous energies Nette, one delicate and erogenous, the star an energy of furious wonder, the two conjoined in flaming color. J.A.B.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/22/2014 7:43:00 PM

Excellent!!!! I see the tulips as clear as day and I also see something completely different. The moon at night is for lovers.

Rhoma Em

Date: 9/22/2014 1:35:00 PM

Awwwh, the emotions here are passionately marked in a thrilling way. Your haiku explodes with brilliance, Nette

Jan Allison

Date: 9/22/2014 12:25:00 PM

wonderful imagery Nette in this beautiful haiku:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx