First Date

A little girl All dressed up Ribbons in hair Going with Dad Holding his hand Her first date..

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/8/2019 2:26:00 PM

hello Barbara, so that is the first date. never went on a date with my dad. have a nice day my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/4/2019 10:03:00 AM

Charmingly sweet! Nothing tops it! Just love , pure love ! Great writing dearest, Barbara!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/2/2019 6:05:00 AM

This is so sweet Barbara! I wish I could have experienced that. I never knew my father though he lived not that far away. I love the imagery portrayed here! : ) xxoo

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/1/2019 11:28:00 AM

Your works speak of truth....so it is...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2019 4:53:00 AM

- Congratulations with this sweet poem, Barbara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/31/2019 8:29:00 PM

Awww...what a lovely vision you created in your sweet ribbon poem, Barbara. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/31/2019 1:38:00 PM

So cute...and I can sure remember my first date with my/daddy's little girl!! Touching! :) gw

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/31/2019 10:19:00 AM

Aww, how precious. Congrats on your placement!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 3/30/2019 7:32:00 PM

Oh this. Is so adorable! I love it! :))) xomo!