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Firecrackers

FIREBREAKERS F~actional bapus fight for independence with loyalty to their country, their I~dealism of independence that become R~eality, which made oppression in heart of the people to vanish E~aseful pandemonium broke out throughout the C~ountry and people rejoice R~ejoice and rejoice, their A~ction marked the beginning of development of our nation also C~reated good lines for the incoming generations to follow, their names were being K~ept in history because their names will be remembered E~very time of independence celebrating R~emembering them reawaken the memory of the past judged with the present to give S~cintillating celebration. Happy independence to my country. 7-13-2015 Contest by celebrate independence Sponsor by Kim Merrmam Bapus means father

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Date: 7/25/2015 3:16:00 PM
Heartfelt, well done.
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Date: 7/24/2015 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations, AM! soup mail
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:05:00 PM
A lovely acrostic Afolabi - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 10:27:00 AM
Afolabi, thank you for sharing the history of your country's independence with this acrostic! Great work! Congrats on your win in my contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/23/2015 9:11:00 AM
Hi Afolabie,I just stopped congratulations by to say on your awesome win:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/23/2015 2:08:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Afolabi! Powerful acrostic!
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:40:00 AM
Afolabi, congratulations on your win. Awesome Acrostic. Love SKAT
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Date: 7/20/2015 11:40:00 PM
:-))) reading the comments, I'm happy for you, my friend. PS. You may wish to put a footnote for the meaning of bapus for those like ,e who do not understand it.
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Date: 7/18/2015 8:17:00 AM
Well done acrostic good luck in the contest. Thanks for stopping by my verse. Light & Love
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Date: 7/17/2015 5:56:00 AM
Afolabi, good flowing lines.. !!! Well-written~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 7/15/2015 10:46:00 PM
Afolabi, I enjoyed every word and verse of your celebratory acrostic. Excellent job! Good luck in the contest:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/15/2015 4:05:00 PM
enjoyed your acrostic, Luv p.d.
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Date: 7/15/2015 7:41:00 AM
A celebration of national pride and recognition of the sacrifices people made to achieve independence! Excellent acrostic dear, A.M.
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Date: 7/14/2015 3:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..It is good to remember and to celebrate the forming of one's country or nation..Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Sara
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Date: 7/14/2015 11:30:00 AM
AM, very nicely done for the contest 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, glances ....
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Date: 7/14/2015 3:03:00 AM
Well done.Congrat.An unforgettable holiday is your poem.
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Date: 7/13/2015 10:55:00 PM
way to write an acrostic with firecrackers. I too chose that same word!!
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Date: 7/13/2015 4:35:00 PM
Bright piece exalting your pride for country and fellowmen,afolabi.. huggs
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Date: 7/13/2015 1:10:00 PM
Excellent writing and really like your way of presenting those people
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Date: 7/13/2015 10:53:00 AM
Beautiful poem on celebration of independence painted with beautiful colors of freedom. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
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