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Fine gifts

I travel to much,
I have witnessed such fine gifts;
the bright eyes, the hips

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  1. Date: 7/16/2009 11:42:00 AM
    I really like this one, i love that its a little poem with so much meaning. Great job

  1. Date: 6/8/2009 4:54:00 PM
    Great poem, James! Now I can't wait to travel in search of the "fine gifts." Perhaps I will run into you when I travel north for my class reunion at the end of summer. Until then, only local travel for me. Are you planning a vacation with a bright-eyed young boy named Noah? Love this write! Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/6/2009 3:32:00 PM
    Aw, thanks James for your thoughtful congrats. As far as this haiku goes, at least you do appreciate the finer things in life. So sensual! Love, Shar

  1. Date: 6/4/2009 6:44:00 AM
    Invitingly romantic ... love the seductive switch .. awesome.

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 2:46:00 PM
    Oh i want to travel much now James, clubs to hit, hip to hip, kool write>James

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 3:43:00 AM
    oo lala! that sounds like just enough to me. ;) love, Kristin

  1. Date: 5/28/2009 1:40:00 AM
    Well versed Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 3:49:00 PM
    ow you witnessed a lot:-),eyes our heart's reflectors

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 1:01:00 PM
    So sweet and passionate:) :) I love that last line. I also love your unique style. I think I have told you that before. Yep...i do :) Love Christie

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 11:56:00 AM
    A wonderful write indeed.....keep it up -Jessica

  1. Date: 5/27/2009 11:25:00 AM
    Love this piece..bright eyes and hips are always playing my song.