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Finding Hope

These dark streets seem empty All shadows, no light But look, there’s a window A candle burns bright This quest makes me weary As decades fly past My first love is gone now Will he be the last? The last man to stroke my hair at night While holding me close No, I can’t believe that’s all there is ‘Cause inside hope grows We may forget how to find it But it lives in our hearts Just follow the path marked “faith” This is where hope starts A new love will find me The curtains will rise Debuting this evening ‘Neath glitter-star skies The emptiness gone now A song’s in my heart But how did I get here? Well, hope played a part The last man to stroke my hair at night While holding me close No, I can’t believe that’s all there is ‘Cause inside hope grows We may forget how to find it But it lives in our hearts Just follow the trail marked “faith” For this is where hope starts July 15, 2020 for John Hamilton’s “Song of Hope” poetry contest (To the tune of “Chariots of Fire”)

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Date: 8/12/2020 3:03:00 PM
Hello Carolyn Devonshire, this is a lovely poem of hope. i like it. Will be my fav. The last verse speaks to me. enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 8/9/2020 6:23:00 AM
I love how faith makes us sail through storms to a hopeful dawn. This is absolutely beautiful Carolyn. Congratulations on your win and also POTD. This one deserves the accolades! Much love :)
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Date: 8/9/2020 5:50:00 AM
Without hope, we have nothing. Congratulations on your wonderful lyrical lines, Carolyn.
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Date: 8/9/2020 5:22:00 AM
I see this got a POTD recognition, and rightfully so! Heartiest congrats on a well-deserved double win, Carolyn:-)
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Date: 8/8/2020 8:30:00 PM
How lovely your rich song of hope is, Carolyn. First POTD, now a win in the Song of Hope contest. Nice to see your talents doubly acknowledged. I know we share the belief that hope starts on the trail marked "faith". I will be singing the Chariots of Fire theme all night, now! A well-deserved repeat congratulations to you, my friend!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/9/2020 10:39:00 AM
John, the tune seems to haunt me too. Loved the movie as well. Thanks for your kind comments.
Date: 8/8/2020 7:07:00 PM
Another fantastic entry thanks Carolyn for your beautiful song, congrats on a nice win!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/9/2020 10:38:00 AM
Thanks, John.
Date: 7/27/2020 1:46:00 PM
Lovely lyrics can almost hum it in a song. Hope all is well with you. We are keeping well and staying home a fair amount. Take care. love phyl
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Date: 7/25/2020 11:50:00 AM
Congrats on POTD honors. Well deserved. Blessings.
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Date: 7/25/2020 11:19:00 AM
Such a nice piece Carolyn, so full of hope to inspire us all. A sheer delight to read indeed and congratulations on the POTD! Blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 7/24/2020 11:33:00 PM
I find this poem to be rather remarkable. Thanks for your kind words-"Iso Phy". Things are going to change and improve for all of us and our families disconnected by the virus. Much love to you and your family.
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Date: 7/19/2020 8:38:00 PM
I am so happy to see this amazing poem honored with POTD Carolyn. Congratulations my friend! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/18/2020 2:34:00 PM
Carolyn, my dear friend congratulations a wonderful, awesome poem absolutely deserving of POTD - where there is hope Carolyn there is faith and where there is faith there is hope. Blessings, hugs Jennifer.
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Date: 7/17/2020 9:09:00 PM
I see this got POTD. That is so cool and so deserving! hope your Bday was fun!
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Date: 7/17/2020 5:19:00 PM
Wow! Back with congrats on POTD, Carolyn! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 7/17/2020 9:23:00 AM
I enjoyed this hopeful faith filled piece. I think this should do very well Carolyn. Hugs Rick and thanks for your thoughtful visit.
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Date: 7/17/2020 5:38:00 AM
This is beautiful, Carolyn! I can feel it touching my heart and that of many others...no wonder I've played it to the instrumental version a few times! Life is nothing without faith, hope and love. ~ a fav ... Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award. ~ Hugs // paul
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 7/17/2020 12:02:00 PM
With everything happening in the world today, birthday celebrations don't have much zest. (Now I can't get the theme song from "Chariots of Fire" out of my mind :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 7/17/2020 6:09:00 AM
Belated birthday wishes, my friend; it completely skipped my mind (to be honest I had not realised the 14th had come and gone!) Love & hugs // paul
Date: 7/17/2020 12:25:00 AM
This is amazing, Carolyn, hope keeps us alive and kicking:)
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Date: 7/17/2020 12:08:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD. this is quite lovely.
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Date: 7/16/2020 10:24:00 PM
~ Just follow the trail marked “faith” For this is where hope starts ~ I completely agree. Your words wraps around my heart. This is beautiful in every way. Congratulations Carolyn, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
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Date: 7/16/2020 6:50:00 PM
Wise words for success and happiness. Hope is a way of willing -- the power of prayer is the power of mind. We can create from seeming nothingness when we believe with our hearts and souls. Lovely, positive read!
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Date: 7/16/2020 1:04:00 PM
Mournful and beautiful, Carolyn. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 7/16/2020 11:58:00 AM
Beautifully penned Carolyn, congratulations on POTD!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 7/16/2020 12:56:00 PM
Well, I'm stunned. Thank you, Tania. Never expected a POTD
Date: 7/16/2020 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "Beautiful" A wonderful write. There is always hope and prayer. Enjoy your win and day...........
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Date: 7/16/2020 10:10:00 AM
If you could get plural congratulations, you should for this lyric!
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Date: 7/16/2020 10:00:00 AM
Back to say how pleased I am to see your song of hope honored with POTD! Congratulations, dear Carolyn!
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