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Final Goodbye

She told him her final goodbye And The sun of happiness was eclipsed by her departure Thus Leaving him in perpetual darkness! © Demetrios Trifiatis 26 October 2015

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/27/2015 2:14:00 PM

Very Nice Demetrios sad but true. Blessings my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/27/2015 3:56:00 PM

Yes, my friend, Michael, sad bud sadness, unfortunately represents a great part of life! Happy you are back! Thank you!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/27/2015 8:14:00 AM

Wow! Vivid images on loneliness and desolation.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/27/2015 3:54:00 PM

We all have been through those moments, dear Monterey! I do not wish anyone to be lonely! thank you for your lovely comment!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/26/2015 1:18:00 PM

Very sad, my dear poet...Very sad. Filakia...Hope all will be well.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/27/2015 4:50:00 PM

Well, my dearest if sadness was absent from life so would be joy! Thank you for your delightful visit!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/26/2015 9:48:00 AM

So true.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2015 11:23:00 AM

Thank you for your gracious comment, my friend, Richard!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/26/2015 9:33:00 AM

A sad one Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2015 9:37:00 AM

Part of life is sad, my friend, Richard. so we shouldn't overlook this, for many of our friends are passing through difficult moments! Thank you!

Constance La France

Date: 10/26/2015 8:26:00 AM

Demetrios, oh so deep and sad, I like it 7 ~

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2015 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Broken Wings for your visit and kind comment!

Miraj Raha

Date: 10/26/2015 8:15:00 AM

Nicely executed Sir.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2015 8:29:00 AM

Miraj, my good friend, how delightful your visit! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2015 8:11:00 AM

- Yes, I understand very well ..... It had been dark .... black !!! - hugs and thank you for being here // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2015 8:17:00 AM

"My dearest friend, Anne-Lise, thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment! "

Lin Lane

Date: 10/26/2015 7:58:00 AM

few words ~ much sentiment, Demetrios

Lin Lane
Date: 10/26/2015 8:22:00 AM

How could I not agree? a kiss, a caress, the look of love in one's eyes...those things do speak volumes.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2015 8:18:00 AM

Sentiments, as you know, are not in need of any words: take a kiss or a caress they are silent but speak volumes! I hope you agree! Thank you, dear Lin, for your beautiful visit and comment!

Anna Hopper

Date: 10/26/2015 7:22:00 AM

Simple yet brilliant words!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/26/2015 7:50:00 AM

Your visit a delightful event, dear Anna! Thank you for the lovely comment!