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Fields of Pink

i often wondered why did October in all of her beauty become national breast cancer month the trees bear resemblance to the sun the yellow, orange, scarlet folds softly spiraling in the cool winds was it the red, as it tumbled down a remembrance of blood shed as lives were lost? was it the bitter cold bite that signified ending and the bare trees that followed as fall exited? as i looked around me daybreak blushed across the sky the trees lined the streets flushed in reds and oranges the dormant green grass began yellowing around the edges amidst all of this were fields of pink a thousand little flags slow dancing in the wind as leaves twirled around them each flag depicting a life touched a battle fought a win or loss against this disease i then realized October's birthstone pink tourmaline is said to have many faces express every mood foster inner harmony and strength it all makes sense as i look at each flag i see faces of many in my community a battle they all fought unwillingly i see joy i see sorrow i see pain a mother a sister an aunt and i see memory all together in fields of pink and i now understand... Sandy Adams 11/02/2013 pinktober contest Inspired by the high school children I am proud to drive to school... they raised over 1000 dollars for breast cancer by selling these flags, the school grounds are fields of pink and most the flags dedicated to those lost...I dedicate this poem to them and our community! Thanking them for the inspiration!

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Date: 8/31/2014 12:28:00 AM
touching write! Do you still post poetry here?
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Date: 8/30/2014 10:06:00 PM
gosh, reading this one again. HOw I miss you here!!!
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Date: 11/11/2013 4:02:00 PM
wow, Sandra, was this for PD's contest on breast cancer awareness? If so, It should have gotten number one spot because this is about as good as it gets for that kind of poetry.
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Date: 11/11/2013 6:46:00 PM
Thank you Andrea...it was for the contest and took a 3rd place win....i still get to look at the pink fields daily! hugs :)
Date: 11/10/2013 1:52:00 PM
awesome write, Sandra
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Date: 11/10/2013 4:17:00 PM
thank you Jack...hope your evening is good! :) hugs
Date: 11/10/2013 11:18:00 AM
hello sandra....i felt for this poem...though it speaks of pain yet the images of nature exist against the backdrop of ill struggle, gave quite a healing effect...beautifully painful piece...congratulations!...thanks for sharing..your soup friend, wendy
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Date: 11/10/2013 4:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Wendy :) hugs
Date: 11/7/2013 10:29:00 PM
Sandra this was very good, lovely impressive win................ SKAT
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:53:00 AM
Thank you Skat...sorry it took so long to respond...am not feeling well and it was a long work week! hugs :)
Date: 11/7/2013 4:57:00 AM
Ah yes Sandra, now I understand as well...Beautifully written and God bless those kids too...Congratulations - Tim
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Tim :) sorry it took so long to respond...am not feeling well and it was a long work week!
Date: 11/6/2013 2:22:00 PM
How wonderful that you know high school children who are helping to fight for the cause. Yes, what an inspiration young people can be....a wonderful poem !
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Carrie :) sorry it took so long to respond...am not feeling well and it was a long work week!
Date: 11/6/2013 1:56:00 PM
Hello PINKTOBER, winning poet --- SANDRA --- Thank you for embracing my contest with your poem. I took my time on this particular contest, many heartfelt poems:-(... If you'd like:) stop by my latest blog "Hold My Pen While I Write." In there you will find my very own PinkTober invitation. Take Care & have yourself an awesome day... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/9/2013 7:55:00 AM
Thank You Linda...what a wonderful surprise :) sorry it took so long to respond...am not feeling well and it was a long work week!
Date: 11/5/2013 5:07:00 PM
This poem is a beautiful and touching tribute to those who have been affected by breast cancer. Excellent writing, my friend!...Thank you very much for the great comments, Sandra! :)
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Date: 11/5/2013 6:04:00 PM
Thank you Kelly...i went by the fields again today and they seem to have gotten even bigger...hugs :)
Date: 11/3/2013 12:07:00 PM
- Sandra, glad that I read this poem - Today we can at least talk about this topic .... for only 30-35 years no one spoke about it .... it was uncomfortable. - A good poem. - Thank you. - - Skillfully school kids !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2013 12:14:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise...I drove by in my bus as they were putting the flags among the school grounds...daily I watched it grow bigger and bigger...these fields of pink were so eye catching...I went on to the school web site and saw how it came to be and the money raised! hugs :)
Date: 11/2/2013 6:27:00 PM
Great write and good job on the fund raising program it will be used for a wonderful purpose to find a cure. also thanks for the congrads.
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Date: 11/2/2013 7:18:00 PM
Thank you...I think these kids did a fantastic job! hugs
Date: 11/2/2013 5:59:00 PM
exceptional piece
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Date: 11/2/2013 7:19:00 PM
Thank you Liam :) hugs
Date: 11/2/2013 2:49:00 PM
Great work about a topic that touches on the lives of many..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visits to my page..Your comments are appreciated..Sara
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Sandra Adams
Date: 11/2/2013 3:12:00 PM
thank you so much Sara...have a great day :) hugs

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