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Fields of Grey

Upon jagged rocks I dwell the sea crashing to my rear I look upon the land rolling hills once vibrant and green now lay barren a mist fills the air and fills my eyes remembering fields of daisies where we used to run where the doe and her fawn would rest and the butterflies would so merrily play I gaze out now onto the fields that turned grey and remember those happier times when life was so simple when there was only love in the air when freedoms were cherished and man and nature were friends I sit here in amazement for what could have been the joy, the excitement all gone astray should I stand up and fight for her or let it all slip away

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Date: 9/4/2016 6:11:00 PM
Well written Tim, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/20/2016 12:28:00 AM
This is absolutely wonderful and raise again the same question...What have we done to nature....Congrats on such profound thoughts and your win. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/19/2016 8:25:00 AM
Well done Tim, congratulations.
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Date: 8/19/2016 4:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Tim:)
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Date: 8/18/2016 7:29:00 PM
Hi TIM, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Don't Come" if you'd like. Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/15/2016 10:02:00 PM
Hi Tim, congratulations on your win!!! XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/10/2016 7:11:00 AM
The images come to life in your poem. It is a beautiful scene and poignant.
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Date: 1/8/2016 10:09:00 AM
Its a shame that humans are letting this happen. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/7/2016 7:42:00 PM
"what could have been".....may be the saddest words of all !! What a wonderful poem !! Congratulations on your win, Tim!
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Date: 1/7/2016 2:09:00 PM
Tim, congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 1/7/2016 12:52:00 PM
Tim, I like the warmth of the fauna described!
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Date: 1/7/2016 12:32:00 PM
Very nicely done, congrats on your placement Tim!
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:14:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Tom! Congrats for having your piece featured in the Poetry Soup home page! ;-)
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Date: 12/16/2015 7:26:00 PM
Now you are needing SHADES of gray, my friend. Anything but these fields!! I really enjoyed this one.
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Date: 12/15/2015 9:37:00 AM
I would say "Fight!" Great poem Tim.
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Date: 12/15/2015 7:45:00 AM
To fight, of course, dear Tim, for if we let it go all will disappear! A beautiful sad poem concealing truths not expressed!
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Date: 12/14/2015 3:23:00 PM
beautiful yet such sad imagery Tim:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/14/2015 2:49:00 PM
It sounds like a lovely place, Tim. I vote for saving it...maybe in a sequel..Rolling Hill Are Green Once More. Seriously, this is another write of great imagery.
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Date: 12/14/2015 12:23:00 PM
Instead of the sins of the father transferring to the son, stand up and fight. The earth is the most precious heirloom we can pass to the generations to come. By saving her we save ourselves. Great write.
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