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Fiction Versus Friction

fiction is
friction
without the R
always smooth
cool
friction is
fiction
with the R
never smooth
hot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/3/2015 8:29:00 AM
I like your concrete poem, Dave. Not many poets write this form. This one carries a gem of truth.
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Date: 2/25/2015 1:45:00 PM
What a smart play on words!! Read it through twice! Delightful ...and oh so true. hugs
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/25/2015 1:55:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, glad you enjoyed. Sometimes wordplay is an end in itself.

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