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Feelings at dusk

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Feelings at dusk

Feelings at dusk

I don’t feel sad, I don’t feel glad
It’s a funny kind of thing
A kind of mellow, easy feel
 Where heart does softly sing
A melody of life’s sweet bliss
As dusk, with sleepy eyes
Seeps in so very stealthily
Looking old, but wise

I sit, and sink into this dusk
As silence comes, so still!
And Sun grows weaker all the time
So low he grows on will
He goes to where he always goes
Each day when night time comes
And tells him with the song of birds
As they signal ‘day is done!’

I sit here very silently
As pen, it scrapes white sheet
And life seems filled with mystery
As sun fades in defeat
Then misty moon takes over sky
So full, and huge and bold
Another day has turned to dusk
Such a wonder to behold!

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  1. Date: 6/21/2013 6:32:00 AM
    wow this poem seems to be the most sincere feeling one gets while watching the dusk,you have penned this perfectly my friend,this poem is truly beautiful

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 6/23/2013 9:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry I have not answered you comment till now.I have been in hospital, but anyway thank you for your praise Priyanka, it was so much appreciated Peter
  1. Date: 6/20/2013 3:29:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 3:28:00 PM
    so much emotion and so well described Peter I love it TFS rating Shadow x smiles

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 6/20/2013 3:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Shadow, you are very kind to me....Peter