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Feathers of Serenity

silver of moonlight lits the night in best feathers tranquils all desires.... Haiku 5/7/5 Written July 14th, 2015 For contest " Feathers " by SKAT A

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Date: 7/19/2015 9:52:00 AM

Brilliant Dr. Upma! Enjoyed it.

Date: 7/18/2015 11:26:00 PM

What a lovely write for the contest good luck............A.M.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/19/2015 12:17:00 AM

Thnx Afolabi

Date: 7/18/2015 10:02:00 PM

Hey, that last line uses a word that has quil in it (almost like quill of a feather) was that intentional? That is a great word play!!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/19/2015 12:15:00 AM

Yes Andrea u hv got me perfect dear! Thnx for ur visit !

Date: 7/14/2015 4:03:00 PM

love the feel of moonlight silver like best feathers...enjoyed

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/19/2015 12:17:00 AM

Thnx Josefina!!