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Fear - Minichu poetry contest by Mohan Chutani

Poem form:

1. Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each)

2. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD.

3. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3.

4. Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting.

5. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3 Stanza 2: 4,8,2 Stanza 3: 2,4,1 Stanza 4: 6,8,1.

Image taken from Google.

Eyes darken in panic Nerves are perplexed, paralyzed by paranoia Turn manic Deadly despair Dizzy from this soul destroyer Health scare Big yelp! At annoyer Help! Eyes darken in panic Dizzy from this soul destroyer Help!

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Paige Hind

Date: 10/6/2023 1:35:00 PM

Deep emotiveness in this piece. I wish you light.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/6/2023 10:50:00 AM

The emotions and pain come alive in this write. Well done. love phyl

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/6/2023 8:53:00 AM

Fear is palpable and intense, evoking a profound emotional response with its concise yet powerful expression. This exceptional display of writing skill is truly magnificent, demonstrating the author's mastery over their craft. Well done Silent One

Bill Baker

Date: 10/5/2023 5:21:00 PM

Tough form to write in, Silent One. Your imagery of words set the tone for your poem well, and the photo helped us to better understand the setting. When it turns to manic the danger of death is surrounded you. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Bill

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/5/2023 3:04:00 PM

Silent One, you did it! Emotional and symptoms very real I like soul destroyer...I use anayalator as innihilator for comic book poetry. Great entry! b0l

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/5/2023 2:25:00 PM

You nailed "Fear" with your write/picture. A story told in a few words. Great Job... Have a wonderful day writing away.............

Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/4/2023 12:39:00 PM

Extremely evocative - job well done. I hope it came from a place of creativity rather than reality. Best wishes

Silent One
Date: 10/5/2023 12:47:00 PM

Thank you, it is not reality at all.. There is hardly anything I fear in life to be honest, not even death..

Tom Woody

Date: 10/4/2023 9:14:00 AM

Help! My annoyer runneth loose. Nice Chu SO

Silent One
Date: 10/5/2023 12:47:00 PM

yeah we all have these annoyers... cheers

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/4/2023 6:13:00 AM

The longing and yearning to be saved is so palpable in this write! Sigh, I can feel the evocative depth of these vulnerable feelings, as they resonate to the core.. When the souls are lost in an immortal oblivion, often losing every bit of hope.. How our hearts ache and wish if they could be pulled out of darkness.. The emotions of ache and pain come alive in this piece.. Such a brilliant take on the form as well and now I too want to try this form.. Absolutely a Fav for me, impeccably crafted!

Silent One
Date: 10/5/2023 12:48:00 PM

I am surprised you faved this one, as its just something i wanted to have a go at.. I don't write short forms anymore, but thought I would try this.. Thank you for your visit.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/4/2023 5:44:00 AM

Fear emanates --deeply felt--in just a few words. Splendidly done, SO.

Silent One
Date: 10/5/2023 12:49:00 PM

Thank you..

Ink Empress

Date: 10/4/2023 3:51:00 AM

How do you do this everytime, you nail any and every form and theme effortlessly! This one emanates fear in the most deepest manner, that left me feeling how haunting it could be to be consumed with fears! I thought this was a hard form but i bet u did this one in few minutes! Uv inspired me to try! “Eyes darken in panic” brilliant refrain! And ofcourse uve got ur alliterations game going strong here too! I love the flow and that picture fits the theme of your poem so perfectly too! Love this

Silent One
Date: 10/5/2023 12:49:00 PM

Thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/4/2023 2:22:00 AM

A dire cry for help in this lovely dark poem. So great emotions. Blessings.

Silent One
Date: 10/5/2023 12:49:00 PM

Thanks.