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Fate

FATE Conceived was I in the vastness of infinite Time, Developed in the womb of never dying Cosmos, Born under the watchful eyes of the vault Of heavens, Breast-fed by destiny’s inescapable Commands And Nurtured by the laws of unyielding Providence, Thus The unswerving path of fate, now, obediently to Follow I have! © Demetrios Trifiatis 06 NOVEMBER 2013

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Donna Jones

Date: 11/8/2013 9:20:00 PM

Destiny's inescapable commands....wow...food for thought....enjoyed Demetrios....

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/9/2013 12:47:00 AM

Thank you, Donna, for visiting! Yes, we have to ponder from time to time those things, especially as time passes by!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 11/8/2013 2:05:00 AM

Fate's path is indeed an unswerving one. Follow obediently but also willingly. Thank you for sharing these pearls of wisdom in such eloquent style, my friend. Licia :-)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/9/2013 12:45:00 AM

Thank you again for your so gracious comment! God bless you! Is only from His wisdom we are inspired!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/9/2013 12:43:00 AM

Better to follow willingly or else...is going to force you! Thank you for commenting, Licia!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/7/2013 9:19:00 AM

You strike a sensitive, warm chord within me, D...life simply is; beautiful!..:) huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/7/2013 11:14:00 AM

I am happy to have stricken that sensitive warm chord in you. I am waiting the melody now to hear! Thank you nette!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/7/2013 7:27:00 AM

- Once I read .... "Man is the one and supreme master of its own destiny if it will just be there." - Well written Demetrios ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/7/2013 7:58:00 AM

Herodotus the Greek historian had said that not even the Gods can escape their fate! Seneca also expressed a similar view! Thank you for your visit!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/6/2013 12:03:00 PM

Dr Trifiatis....my dear poet...I applaud you heartily...Telios esai..san ta logia pou xrisiomopesis eth....Lathos egrapsa??? ;-)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/6/2013 12:59:00 PM

Oxi den kaneis lathos! Dearest Eileen, thank you very much for your visits and for your comments that always are in the superlative degree! You are so kind and cordial that I feel a simple "thank you" is not sufficient to express my appreciation!

Arden Gopela

Date: 11/6/2013 7:42:00 AM

This is so creative, Demetrios! Fate is something that's invisible to the eye but definitely, it is before us and will be after us.I like this one! All the best my souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/6/2013 8:43:00 AM

Welcome, Arden! How nice for you to visit with such a loving and gracious comment!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/6/2013 5:14:00 AM

hi Demetrios I love the way you have nailed fate excellent very much enjoyed your creative pen Shadow x smile hug

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/6/2013 8:45:00 AM

Shadow, my dear, thank you for your bighearted comment!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/6/2013 2:51:00 AM

All of mankind has a fate bestowed upon them, and it truly is an inescapable one! I just love how your poems flow, they move along quite nicely and fluidly as if designed for a special kind of speech, a higher order of speech! This is an awesome and grandiose write here my friend! I surely loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What a brilliant piece, written with a masterful third eye, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/6/2013 4:25:00 AM

Russell, my faithful friend, yes, things are as you say they are! Yes, it is designed for a special kind of spiritual speech! When one speaks the language the message clear it becomes! Thank you so much!

Joseph Matose

Date: 11/6/2013 1:38:00 AM

GREAT EPIGRAM DEMETRIOS. YOUR CONCEPTUALISATION OF NATURE AND SPIRITUALITY IS SO PURE, CRYSTAL CLEAR AND DEEP-CUTTING.SUCH AN EPIGRAM CAN ONLY EMANATE FROM THE SUBLIME. THANKS FOR MAKING. FRIEND, JM

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/6/2013 4:22:00 AM

My friend, Joseph, you a mystic must be! Thank you for your understanding!