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Far Past My Bedtime

At the end of my weakened rope, I debate my Fate, then I pause For I'm standing on the Edge of Hope From a World so full of flaws What was real has fallen Fake, And that is why I must escape! Nothing's True and nothing's Fair- A Dream from which I never wake...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/9/2013 9:01:00 AM
This is a deep and powerful write. The reader is given something to think about with the depth of this poem nice job
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Date: 10/10/2013 12:36:00 PM
I always hope that what I write gives the reader something to ponder and ruminate; I'm glad this poem left that impression on you. Thanks for the read and review; much appreciated :)

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