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Far Past My Bedtime

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Far Past My Bedtime

At the end of my weakened rope,
I debate my Fate, then I pause
For I'm standing on the Edge of Hope
From a World so full of flaws

What was real has fallen Fake,
And that is why I must escape!
Nothing's True and nothing's Fair-
A Dream from which I never wake...

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  1. Date: 10/9/2013 9:01:00 AM
    This is a deep and powerful write. The reader is given something to think about with the depth of this poem nice job

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    Date: 10/10/2013 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I always hope that what I write gives the reader something to ponder and ruminate; I'm glad this poem left that impression on you. Thanks for the read and review; much appreciated :)