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Fantasy World

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Fantasy World

Was it real or in a dream
Wizards and kings, chocolate ice cream
Dinosaurs roamed from early morn
Flying zebras and a unicorn
Dancing in the sky from star to star
Travel the universe in a flying car
Make believe ship manned by pirates and thieves
And a tree that was covered with spearmint leaves
No one cared about silver or gold
We were children again who would never grow old
There was a horse in the field talking to a mule
My cat said horses can't talk, don't be a fool
I told my cat that the prince once was a frog
A firefly whispered your cat once was a dog
The earth began rumbling but I took it in stride
I just jumped on my rug for a magic carpet ride
I stopped on a mountain when I reached the peak
A polar bear asked me whom do you seek
I reached for the bear and he began to smoke
Then a penguin stopped by and told me a joke
I flew back to earth when I heard a bell toll
As fate would have it, I ran into a troll
He huffed and he puffed and smiled and said
Come have a conversation with my talking head
The head was a monster but I wasn't afraid
He said I'm getting a body as soon as I get paid
Then I walked down a road that was red and yellow
I noticed the shrubs were made of strawberry jello
Suddenly a space ship landed from out of the sky
In a field that was filled with banana cream pie
This may be hard to believe but i swear that it's true
As sure as my skin is green and my hair is blue.

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  1. Date: 5/26/2012 5:45:00 AM
    Like this poem alot Vince...we need some fantasy in to the world today..... - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 2:44:00 PM
    I thought John Lennon was dead. This is incredibly fanciful imaginative material you have written here Vince. Your rhyming adds another dimension to the entire work.

  1. Date: 1/15/2012 12:44:00 PM
    We need this type of write to put things in perspective Vince; 'ya see who said there's no joy to be had..? and for the cost of nothing i have been made glad..!

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 8:13:00 AM
    Hey, Vince, just revisiting this one of yours. I hope to see a lot more poetry from you in the new year!! THis remains a great fun poem.

  1. Date: 1/2/2012 6:53:00 AM
    I totally agree with Debbie. Seeing your words to illustrations would surely demand a drug test. Koolio piece Vince, have a wonderful 2012 - James :)

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 4:26:00 PM
    wonderful I want illustrations!! Hope you have grand kids to read this to? Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/5/2011 7:53:00 AM
    A very delightful read. It'd be great as a book to read to children, too. Very imaginative and well put together!

  1. Date: 12/2/2011 5:24:00 PM
    Vince what a magical ride you took us on with this unique poem. loved it. Thanks for your wishes and Ryan is in a fair amount of pain today. I asked Jen what they gave him and it was tylenol 3 so thank goodness nothing stronger. Thanks for your advice. love phyl

  1. Date: 11/21/2011 12:52:00 PM
    So creative, Vince. Love the "talking head" monster, Smokey the polar bear and the witty penguin. This is a delightful flight of fantasy! Thanks so much for sharing it -- it was fun taking this "magic carpet" ride with you. Hope you and your family have a Happy Thanksgiving, Vince. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 11/18/2011 10:44:00 PM
    Took me back to when imagination ran free.. wonderfully entertaining! Thank you also for stopping by and reading though some of my poems. I enjoyed your comments. ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 11/15/2011 2:22:00 PM
    You left nothing for the rest of us Vince. this is wonderful. I think it will be just what she is looking for. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 10:48:00 PM
    well, you really went to town on the fantasy world theme, like a fun dream it is!! It's for the contest, right?

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 6:37:00 PM
    * “What A Joyful, Colourful, Enchanting & Magical Poetic Ride * My Dear Precious Vince * And All Things Are Possible Unto This of A Child * And What Eyes Have Yet Seen * The Beauties That Shall Be * A Fantastic Fave to Be Treasured & Stored As Reference Unto One Day *.* Luv Always * Sarah.” *

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 6:03:00 PM
    We all live in a yellow submarine.... LOVE this, Vince, thanks for the grin! namaste~N

  1. Date: 11/14/2011 4:50:00 PM
    Vince, exactly this imagination frees the bonds that tether us to possibilities! my intent entirely in my latest write...BRAVO!!!! jimbo