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Fantasy

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Fantasy

Here I am, compelled again
so powerless to fight…
A captive of intense desire
and needing you tonight…

Resistance just an afterthought
I’m way beyond that now…
Entangled in this fantasy
that captured me somehow…

Your pleasure takes my breath away
Oh please don’t let this end….
An avalanche upon me now
and soon it falls again...

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  1. Date: 6/27/2014 8:30:00 PM
    Yupe tis true tis true, one feels this way after the heart has met his mate. Perfectly worded and beautifully rhymed.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 7:42:00 PM
    - Beautiful poem, Jon !!!!! - Nice to see you back :) oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 9:34:00 PM
    Beautiful write Jon. Love the flow.

  1. Date: 10/5/2013 7:57:00 PM
    You're sentimental thoughts get me every time, nice to read your words of passion tonight xxx

    Arno Avatar Jon Arno
    Date: 12/20/2013 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you my friend...Your comments are loved. Have a great evening xo Jon
  1. Date: 10/5/2013 7:56:00 PM
    Oh, the desires that leave us breathless... Nice poem. It leaves some to the imagination. Very excellently written, as all of your poetry is. Your Friend, Cindy

    Arno Avatar Jon Arno
    Date: 12/20/2013 5:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cindy...I hope all your dreams come true :)