Falling

falling to my knees in grief -- solid ground

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Kerry Singleton

Date: 7/25/2012 3:37:00 AM

This i have done too many times, much love & blessings to you Debbie & thank you for your visit xx

Kathryn Collins

Date: 7/24/2012 6:49:00 AM

Dear Debbie - the reality of solid ground has cracked these old knees many a time - but always kept me from sinking. love, Kathy

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/21/2012 12:10:00 PM

Hope it is not real grief but just from to much work. Yes, I was thrilled to make it to the first round. That is a first for me. Thanks and the kids are boys so not into poetry and neither is my husband so it is appreciated my poetry friends give me a boost of hurrah. love phyl

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/21/2012 1:35:00 AM

Sweet enigma...thank you for congrats on my poem "the old poet" moving to the second round...made you sad?... intention was to find comfort in our legacy, our physical existence has an inevitable expiration date...no worries! The next life experience will be even more thrilling! Rainbows will expand our color palette and our thoughts will communicate at a blink! Jimbo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2012 2:43:00 PM

Good one..I hope just a work and not life..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Charles Henderson

Date: 7/20/2012 2:41:00 PM

Hey, this is great. I have so mut trouble with this form.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/20/2012 11:25:00 AM

Wooow powerful words Debbie, well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2012 11:03:00 AM

Wow, this one is DEEP. You have a double meaning in it, Debs. Is that acceptable in haiku. heehee. I just love the ones that play on words and also use personification.

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/20/2012 2:10:00 PM

this is listed under senryu Andie, but if the is an objective exterior input which also gives you an internal impression of the poets feelings yes its apparently fine

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/20/2012 10:41:00 AM

Gods ground,take all your grief Debbie,great write