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Facing the Sun

It is a beautiful dawn The early star has risen on this chilly December morn And its not about seeing it's magical splendour like wax-melt yellow dripping from a honeycomb upon first gentle snowfall But its about smelling it Inhaling its soft sweet fragrance Like that of a lily`s delicate scent lingering through my freshly laundered white shirt hanging upon the bedroom chair And its not about seeing its magical splendour Like that in a hundred blushes of glistening hues Its about touching it,feeling it A cosy tender feeling Like that of a Summer breeze Like slight breathed whispers upon these cold cheeks Like warm little kisses upon my Winter lips and his playful strong arms wrapped around my slender curved hips.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/13/2014 11:59:00 AM
Another whimsical and dreamy piece from Miss Chircop! And it's not about seeing its magical splendor - very nice! You truly excel when it comes to nature's never-ending inspiration. Yet always paired together with your own experience, makes it all the more relate-able and personal.
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Date: 12/13/2014 10:31:00 AM
Lovely write with splendid imagery Charmaine..
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Date: 12/13/2014 8:40:00 AM
Dropped back in Char to fav this!
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:29:00 PM
Reminds me of my own desert of dreams
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Date: 12/12/2014 7:44:00 PM
Have I said " Oh my, delicious!!!" LOL well I say it again!!!!!
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Date: 12/10/2014 7:49:00 AM
I can see why Arthur was inspired to write his Mirror Poem. This is quite captivating.
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:41:00 AM
blushes,glistening hues,honey, winter lips,whispers,playful strong arms ,slender curved hips---Charmaine darling a feast for gods? Love XXX rajat
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Date: 12/9/2014 6:50:00 AM
Hmmmm the holiday has done you good Charm! Back with a lovely, mellow, sensory offering, where melting honey and playful kisses contribute to a romantic atmosphere. #7 // paul
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:41:00 PM
Charmaine, I love that you have brought all the senses into this poem it is wonderful. Seeing all the wonderful colors, touching and smelling the clean fresh snow and the clean air. Blessings eve
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Date: 12/8/2014 7:31:00 PM
Another brilliant write Charmaine, A beautifully array of the sense's Really enjoy your poetry. Bless you Kevin
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Date: 12/8/2014 3:58:00 PM
you are so good with sensory images, CHarma. You employed nearly all of them here: sense of touch, sight and smell.... Wonderful. And welcome back!!
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:51:00 PM
outstanding piece of writing carmaine topshelf pen dear friend
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Date: 12/8/2014 12:57:00 PM
Captivating and exhilarating! Marvelously presented in spellbound verses, dear Charmaine!
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:25:00 AM
Wow so delightful Charmaine! God bless u dear!
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Date: 12/7/2014 6:43:00 PM
Oh my, delicious!!!
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Date: 12/7/2014 4:58:00 PM
I can see, feel, and taste the wonderful favors of love . . . it is arousing a deep hunger for winter lips and curved hips. Nicely done my dear friend. a fav
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Date: 12/7/2014 4:58:00 PM
All that you write warms me completely, and it always will, as does another on the Soup. Hugs for the week ahead, James :)x
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Date: 12/7/2014 4:27:00 PM
A stunning poem Char!
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Date: 12/7/2014 2:51:00 PM
Welcome back, sweetie. This is a lovely piece....and gently works its way up to a sensual end.
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Date: 12/7/2014 2:36:00 PM
Arousing the senses on this beautiful December morn...You paint such a fantastic picture...hugs Tim
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