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Touching me
In those places
Deep within my heart
Bringing serenity
While I sleep in peaceful dreams
Being held in your loving arms
Feeling your warm touch against my skin
Wanting this moment to last forever

Listening to your heart’s gentle beating
Heaven in the comfort of your love
A life renewed by your sweet smile
Touching the depths of my soul
Taking away my breath
Fulfilling my dreams
Seeing the flames
Within your

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  1. Date: 9/18/2011 6:50:00 PM
    Subtly the surprise in the ending lines. Beautifully done. E.J.

  1. Date: 8/3/2011 1:42:00 PM
    Wonderful poem and skillfully done. Love and Light, Vince.

  1. Date: 7/28/2011 12:59:00 AM
    A really good love poem here. The eyes will tell you what the lips won't say. They are the windows of the soul. Great job here. God Bless, JB

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 12:18:00 PM

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 11:48:00 AM
    Beautiful, just beautiful, Vince! Thank You, for your comment about, "Women Of Extinction".

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 4:06:00 PM
    A very warm and love filed poem Vince. I am actually working on my third book. I asm in the editing stage. Will keep you updated. Blessings.

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 1:27:00 PM
    What a remarkably beautiful love poem, aesthetically worded and enchanting. It gives glow to the eyes. Thanks for your kind words on my poem My Departed Friends. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 5/17/2011 6:47:00 AM
    A nicely constructed and poetic piece.

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 6:44:00 PM
    so lovely. the eyes truly are the window to your soul

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 7:55:00 AM
    This is a heartwarmer.....the eyes can hold a world of emotions behind them! Nice one!!

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 6:58:00 AM
    Wow this is an excellent poem so full of passion and love. love phyl

  1. Date: 4/22/2011 12:57:00 PM
    a very nice write, enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 4/20/2011 4:50:00 AM
    hi there, vince... souo mail! :)

  1. Date: 4/19/2011 6:28:00 AM
    Very cool! were we supposed to put them under free verse? [when your attacked hold up a mirror and let them scare themselves to death!] even this is naughty LOL, Light & Love