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Eye-catcher

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Eye-catcher

raised my head 
turned my eyes towards the sun
felt so weightless
instead of the heavy lead

watched the blue sky
absorbed the heat from the the sun
felt the warmheartedness
instead of the usual necktie

impressed by the touch
getting used to the intense sun
moved by its presence
instead of another double dutch

such an overwhelming impact
trough a renewed optic tract 

©Ellie Daphne 




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  1. Date: 9/30/2013 6:03:00 AM
    very impressive thoughts, Ellie

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 2/13/2014 4:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    TY for expressing your impressive(!) opinion. Dutch greetings. Elly