Eye Candy

I sit in the mall for hours at a time The young fillies today surely don't mind Showing their parts I considerate it art Sure enjoy gawking and glad I ain't blind © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/14/2015 5:03:00 AM

An art gallery all around I suppose? : ) Love you dear. Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/14/2015 6:26:00 AM

If they want to show their assets, I'm only willing to gawk!!! LOL Love, Jackson xxxxxxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 7/26/2015 10:14:00 AM

Oh, Oh! Now you have Grandpa Troll heading for the mall!... Oh well... It's also a great and Dry place to walk today... Yep... It's raining again. But just a steady drizzle. And this month is way more normal than the last two were... :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/26/2015 3:56:00 PM

Is Grandpa Troll trolling for young girl trolls??? LOL BTW We've sunny and warm, 80s, for about a week now! Sorry for you... xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/26/2015 8:12:00 AM

Surely you have to be thankful otherwise it would be impossible to admire God's finest creation! Thank you Jack for your help. The problem with the comments is finally resolved! Enjoyed your Limerick!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/26/2015 8:23:00 AM

You're very welcome my Montreal friend! Love the scenery at the mall! LOL Have a great day!

Tim Smith

Date: 7/26/2015 7:02:00 AM

I can see your grin from here....don't ever let it disappear.... A look won't hurt....so wear a short skirt....cause from Jack you have nothing to fear

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/26/2015 7:16:00 AM

You sure got that right! It's my inalienable right to look but no touchies!!!

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/26/2015 6:44:00 AM

Bird watching now at the mall, Santa? Good morning! hugs

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/26/2015 6:47:00 AM

LOL "Bird watching"!!!! Santa loves all the sweet birdies in their SHORT shorts! Naughty Santa!!! Have a sweet day sweet Kimmie... love, Jack xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/26/2015 6:24:00 AM

LOL... good thing eye candy doesn't give you cavities. :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/26/2015 6:37:00 AM

Old but I ain't dead!!! LOL Hello sweet thing... love Jack xxx