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Ewe and Eye

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Ewe and Eye

scrabble babble
is coughed
empty couloirs
words lie
on jaded

dumb logic
from your tongue
with the intensity
of angel falls
the tower
of babel s
non existent

taut and terse
are spit
into my mouth
my esophagus
with the
sweet bile
of your
bitter love
for me

twisted explanations
with fragments
of admitted guilt
in reverse
to the
we uttered
our final
wedding vows

do i

poke a spoon
into a puddle
of campbell s
alphabet soup
as I peruse
my leather bound
thesaurus and
of you

and now
i m
to realize
that the
sole existence
of one s
warped sense
of commitment
on a duo s
of insensitive

during the
sharp and
neatly shredded
paper years
and falsified
were hardly

you love i

Author's Note:
Punctuation marks and capitalization of words
were deliberately omitted for poetic effect.

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  1. Date: 4/10/2011 10:37:00 AM
    Hi John- A very strong, extremely clever and to my mind un-putdownable.Enjoyed it and congratulate you on being a winner.Luv June(Sylvia)

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 5:33:00 PM
    Congrats John on your poem being among the winners. Vince

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 1:36:00 PM
    John, Congratulations on your win in the Soup contest! Best wishes, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/31/2011 5:34:00 AM
    ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT!!! AS IS EVERYTHING YOU WRITE. Many congrats, John on your win in the Nov. Competition. Hugs, Elaine

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 10:38:00 AM
    Congratulations on your amazing win in PS's Intl. Contest, John! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/30/2011 6:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your 6th place win in the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest John. I enjoyed reading your poem again this morning. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/29/2011 7:01:00 PM
    Very effective. Congratulations John on a big win with a great poem. Joyce

  1. Date: 3/26/2011 10:24:00 PM
    congrats on getting three through in the final round, John.

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 12:37:00 PM
    Many congrats on your well deserved three first round successes John - luv Janette

  1. Date: 3/7/2011 10:33:00 AM
    best wishes on this success John.

  1. Date: 3/6/2011 6:28:00 PM
    Congrats John on your first round success in the Poetry Soup contest my friend..luv..

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 3:53:00 PM
    Congrats John on "Ewe And Eye" being featured this week. Vince

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 1:51:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup John. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 7:26:00 PM
    Thank you for sharing us this wonderful piece of art. Congratulations on your featured poem. Ernilando

  1. Date: 2/20/2011 7:20:00 PM
    Congrats John on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. great piece to share with us all with luv...

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 12:35:00 AM
    Outstanding write, John! Excellent piece! That's why Matt chose it among the winners! Congratulations! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 7:11:00 PM
    You are amazing...!! This poem boggles my mind!! Excellent entry to Matt's contest! Congratulations! ~

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 5:33:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest John. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/19/2009 11:12:00 AM
    Nicely done,, speaking in reverse .. guilty.. Great job! Hugs, Robin

  1. Date: 4/16/2009 10:58:00 PM
    .."nightmarishly daydream of you" love the line. something to be reckoned with. how do you do Sir john?